Milanimo

Hi! I really enjoyed this piece. I like how the questions are open ended and have a nice flow. It gives a feeling of emptiness and loneliness with the way ...

Great job! Very compelling! I can't say there's much wrong this poem. It's amazing. I enjoyed the strong diction and the deep meaning behind the words. The poem did not ...

I enjoyed this poem. I liked how it has repetition and a continuing theme of fate. It created an awe inspiring picture of a execution, and had a beautiful flow ...

Very emotional! Great job with the story telling! I liked how you held so much imagery in so little words, as well as how simple the word choice was but ...

Hi! I LOVE this poem! The rhyming scheme was superb! I definitely could not think of a way to match up that many words. Each line had so much meaning, ...

I love the poem! It is very enticing. While I feel most poems should have specific stanzas for each thought, your thought was correct in not breaking up each line ...

Hi! I really enjoyed this poem! Very sweet! I like how it was clear and simple and didn't need large words or phrases to show your emotion. My only concern ...

Hi! I liked how you made it clear to even first time readers(like me) that this was a fantasy novel. I also enjoyed how the characters' personalities showed even through ...

Its a very nice piece! I like how you started new lines as the perfect times. As well as the magnificent imagery you used. Your words painted an amazing picture ...

Hi! I like the general idea of the work, and it seems like a good start. The first critique I'd like to make is the general past tense and present ...

Great job! Very uplifting! I enjoyed the allusion to Achilles, as well as the fact that you used stanzas! It creates a great division of multiple thoughts, and makes the ...

Hi! I also love the work of HP Lovecraft! I own a book of his works. But anyway, I enjoyed the narrative. It was described in a way that was ...

I really enjoyed this poem! The one concern I have is that there are no stanzas. It makes it confusing for the reader and can distract them from the point ...

I have to say, very good job! I liked how the poem slowly expanded its meaning throughout, starting very vague and then beginning to add in details of the feelings. ...

Here for the first comment! I enjoyed how you made sure the opposite meanings were clear and concise, and how it was straight to the point. A reader can easily ...