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Mikko

Mikko

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Counting the Stars

    This really is a beautiful poem! I especially like this stanza: What will I wish for? I haven’t got a clue but when it comes down to it I think ...

    Mar 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Somewhere Over The Rooftop.

    I really like this poem! No, seriously, I mean really like it because it's touching. Maybe because I've had to take this decision a few times so I know how ...

    Mar 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: As if I Never Existed

    I love your poem! I really felt the emotion. I like rhyme but there are two words that I don't think really rhyme: "sharp" and "heart". But that's ok Keep ...

    Mar 3, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Love Suite

    Hey! I’m going to do a full review on you story. Don’t worry, I’ll be nice! I definitely like your story! And take it as a compliment from someone who ...

    Mar 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: My Home

    Wow! I see someone's inspired today...unlike me. Anyway, yes, the poem is sweet. I like the line: Reminiscing of who I’m missing because of the rhyme in one line and ...

    Mar 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: My Day Dreams

    I really like your poem. I like the rhyme and the repetition of "Oh". Now I know that I am not the only math-class day dreamer! Keep these lovely little ...

    Mar 2, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: This Isn't Me--Part One

    Adam Young! Yeah Owl City! Anyway... It's not bad, but it was very rushed! If you took some time to really explain some things like Joe's features, how Nick felt ...

    Feb 22, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Unnamed One-First

    I like this and I really want to read what will happen next. Ok, the little mistakes that I noticed have already been reviewed, so I'm not really needed here. ...

    Feb 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Scent-iment on a One Night Stand

    I really like your poem espacially its simplicity and the repetition of lines. I love the last stanza! Your poem is really nice and I hope to read many of ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: January 24th

    I didn't really understand this poem either. But hey, that's the magic of a poet: one doesn't always find the meanings of a poet's poem. Let me tell you what ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Boogie Man

    Hey! I liked your poem! Very creepy, so effective. Ok, so when you started using "Boogie Man, Boogie Man" as the first line of the first two stanzas, I felt ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Worship Thy Beaver

    Nice poem! I have these comments (in blue): Norbert; like diamonds, is forever. He is all I need to please me. He can stimulate and tease me. He won't leave ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Help! Help! Help! (Not really)

    I definately like what you did with this poem! Especially because it actually made me smile (when I'm not really in a smiling mood...). But bears eat dears? Hit me ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Our wild Night

    Oh! I liked the 'unexpected' part at the end. I agree with the above comments (grammar, spelling and lack of imagery/emotions). It's not bad, just not so special. However I ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Children of the Sea

    Hey! This is a really nice poem, I have to say, and I believe that your family were not just obliged to say they liked it because I agree with ...

    Jan 30, 2011


I was born to speak all mirth and no matter.
— William Shakespeare