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Re: Counting the Stars
This really is a beautiful poem! I especially like this stanza: What will I wish for? I haven’t got a clue but when it comes down to it I think ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: Somewhere Over The Rooftop.
I really like this poem! No, seriously, I mean really like it because it's touching. Maybe because I've had to take this decision a few times so I know how ...
Mar 7, 2011 -
Re: As if I Never Existed
I love your poem! I really felt the emotion. I like rhyme but there are two words that I don't think really rhyme: "sharp" and "heart". But that's ok Keep ...
Mar 3, 2011 -
Re: Love Suite
Hey! I’m going to do a full review on you story. Don’t worry, I’ll be nice! I definitely like your story! And take it as a compliment from someone who ...
Mar 2, 2011 -
Re: My Home
Wow! I see someone's inspired today...unlike me. Anyway, yes, the poem is sweet. I like the line: Reminiscing of who I’m missing because of the rhyme in one line and ...
Mar 2, 2011 -
Re: My Day Dreams
I really like your poem. I like the rhyme and the repetition of "Oh". Now I know that I am not the only math-class day dreamer! Keep these lovely little ...
Mar 2, 2011 -
Re: This Isn't Me--Part One
Adam Young! Yeah Owl City! Anyway... It's not bad, but it was very rushed! If you took some time to really explain some things like Joe's features, how Nick felt ...
Feb 22, 2011 -
Re: The Unnamed One-First
I like this and I really want to read what will happen next. Ok, the little mistakes that I noticed have already been reviewed, so I'm not really needed here. ...
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: A Scent-iment on a One Night Stand
I really like your poem espacially its simplicity and the repetition of lines. I love the last stanza! Your poem is really nice and I hope to read many of ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: January 24th
I didn't really understand this poem either. But hey, that's the magic of a poet: one doesn't always find the meanings of a poet's poem. Let me tell you what ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Boogie Man
Hey! I liked your poem! Very creepy, so effective. Ok, so when you started using "Boogie Man, Boogie Man" as the first line of the first two stanzas, I felt ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Worship Thy Beaver
Nice poem! I have these comments (in blue): Norbert; like diamonds, is forever. He is all I need to please me. He can stimulate and tease me. He won't leave ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Help! Help! Help! (Not really)
I definately like what you did with this poem! Especially because it actually made me smile (when I'm not really in a smiling mood...). But bears eat dears? Hit me ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Our wild Night
Oh! I liked the 'unexpected' part at the end. I agree with the above comments (grammar, spelling and lack of imagery/emotions). It's not bad, just not so special. However I ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Children of the Sea
Hey! This is a really nice poem, I have to say, and I believe that your family were not just obliged to say they liked it because I agree with ...
Jan 30, 2011
