Mikko

I really like this poem because it sounds cute and like a traditional Christmas poem where girls wait for their lovers to return for the festive periods. I like it ...

I like the idea, I find the poem nice. But I just don't understand the rhyming pattern. The first stanza goes abbc the second goes aaaa the third goes aabb ...

You're amazing! If J.K. Rowling knew what you were doing to her characters she would love you too! Keep writing more of these I want to know what happents next, ...

I really like this because I like the way it relates to me (and I guess to other people too) and the fact that we all have our comfort zones. ...

I like the way the things you hate rhyme! :) I really like this poem and its simplicity, especially the fact that it relates to most people. It's sort of ...

I agree, don't be nervous because I personally think that all that matters is you loving your work. I have to say that I really liked your work and I ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS! I'm sort of new too so I know how it feels to post your first work. I think it's good but maybe you should go over ...

The spelling mistakes *check* "I.LOVE.IT" *check* "It relates to all who have had crushes" *check* What more is there to say? Oh yes! Keep writing because we (and by 'we' ...

I love this! It sound like it's coming from experience (am I wrong?). Anyway what I love most about it is the reality in it--how much truth there is in ...

Nice poem. I agree that it is all stuck in one lump and that separating it into stanzas would make it more interesting. My favourite line is Never caring, ever ...

Wow! I love it, it made me laugh at some parts and I like the tempting cliffhanger. I also like the fact that you saw from a teenage boy's point ...