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Re: Diamonds on Saturn
Hi, it's Mika here! I haven't really been reviewing much these recent weeks so I hope I'm at least of some use today. In this short story, I love how ...
Oct 23, 2023 -
Re: The Stranger
Hello there, Mika here! This poem is cool. Like really. It captures a fleeting moment of longing and desire and evokes the sense of yearning for something lost. I like ...
Apr 28, 2023 -
Re: sunken corpse
Hi, it's Mika here! I'm gonna be very honest with you in this poem! So let's go. Firstly, The use of "you" in the second stanza is unclear and could ...
Apr 28, 2023 -
Re: Sakura 🌸
Hi, it's Mika. I just want to say I love Japan, it's my favorite country and I love sakura! This story is beautifully written story and it captures the essence ...
Apr 22, 2023 -
Re: Everything into Nothing
Hi, it's Mika here! This story is entertaining, and it has a nice flow. It's really cool. There could be some improvements that I'm going to list down! So, let's ...
Apr 22, 2023 -
Re: Everyone together
Hi, it's Mika here for a quick review! So, this poem is a simple yet powerful message about unity and the strength of working together, which is nice! I like ...
Apr 22, 2023 -
Re: Blue eyes
Hello, It's Mika here! First of all, I like blue eyes too. I don't know, it's just something about their color that makes them look so striking. This poem captures ...
Apr 22, 2023 -
Re: "Slow"
Hello, it's Mika here again! This poem is full of emotion. The use of rhyming has given it a musical quality and it's really fun and pleasing to read! The ...
Apr 22, 2023 -
Re: Writer's Block
Hi, it's Mika here for a quick review. Writer's block is really normal and common for all writers to experience. But what I really like is how you made how ...
Apr 21, 2023 -
Re: To My Friend, The Werewolf Girl
Hello there again! I believe we've met before. It's Mika! Firstly, I want to say this an excellent poem, about friendship and camaraderie. The two people in the poem seem ...
Apr 21, 2023 -
Re: symbiosis
Hello there, It's Mika here for a quick review! I like reading love poetry, so it's no wonder I read this! And I'm happy I read this, because it's such ...
Apr 18, 2023 -
Re: I Like Sunrises
Hi, Mika here for a quick review/comment! Sunrises truly are a spectacular sight. In fact, I don't like em, I love em! They're warm, pretty and just make the world ...
Apr 18, 2023 -
Re: I am no longer innocent - True events </3
Hi, Mika here. Reading this I'm not very sure if it was truly your fault for ending up in the hospital with an issue with your liver. I'm also quite ...
Apr 18, 2023 -
Re: Life
Hi, Mika again for yet another review! Again, this is a beautiful poem! It teaches us so much by just reading a few sentences! The first thing I had in ...
Apr 18, 2023 -
Re: Only if...
Hii, MIka here for a quick comment/review! I really like this poem. It's short but just lovely, it made my day just by reading it! You can do anything if ...
Apr 17, 2023
