Young Writers Society

Hi, Mika here for a quick review/comment!

Sunrises truly are a spectacular sight. In fact, I don't like em, I love em! They're warm, pretty and just make the world feel so open, so peaceful. Darkness vanishes when the sun rises, and that's what I truly love about them. And the words you use and the way you have written this poem is so powerful, meaningful, relatable and it really speaks to me. Especially the last part. Gazing at the sunrise (sometimes through sunglasses ) really makes me feel small, in an oddly comforting and calm way. This is just my opinion but it makes everywhere else so big. it makes me feel like less than a fraction of the earth. Honestly, my opinions are weird! Anyways, thank you for the good read! Lovely poem! Bye for now, have a great day/night/afternoon and I hope you catch sights of more beautiful sunrises!!

Hiya! Koco here!
I really loved this poem! Each word felt very heavy and emotional, in a good way! It portrays the sunset as something otherworldly and beckoning, or a masterful piece of art. It does a great job of portrayed the speaker's sheer awe.

Who I am, and what I feel becomes so small,
so insignificant.
That,
is an odd comfort.