Midnightmoon

No problem! :D

I'm trying to get across that she doesn't have feelings. She was experimented on, basically a machine. Any ideas as to how I can make that come across more clearly?

Thank you!

I'm glad I could help! :)

It's a good idea though!

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So sorry. My computer keeps glitching. I'll get a moderator to fix the triple comment.

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So sorry. My computer keeps glitching. I'll get a moderator to fix the triple comment.

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Hello. Gorgeous poem. I totally understand what you are saying in this poem, and how you feel. I don't have anything really to point out, I love the way the ...

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Hello. Gorgeous poem. I totally understand what you are saying in this poem, and how you feel. I don't have anything really to point out, I love the way the ...

No problem!

That's just the way I was taught. That single I's should be capitalized. It's just a nitpick, not necessary to the poem. :D

I'm so sorry for the double comment. Computer glitch.

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Hi there! So I'll break this down, and I'll go through what I found confusing, then a few grammar improvements you could make, and then what I liked about this ...

Thank you! And Thanks for coming back. I know I've asked a lot. :D

@RavenBlack Sorry it took so long. If you want to review or read it one more time, I redid the nightmare.