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You have a very sweet and cute poem there. Although I think that you could clear the structuring up a bit. Make it into stanzas so that they rhyming pattern ...

You have a really nice topic there. And you executed it quite well. It was plain, yes, but I like things plain: it's easy for people (ie. me) to understand. ...

To be honest here, some of the lines seemed forced. I don't think that you should ever put rhyming first in poetry, because if that's the main point of the ...

So... Your poem has a very nice flow, it's got the correct grammar, nice structure and even a bit of rhyming. I say you did well the rhyming, the lines ...

Alright, I feel as though you've put a bit too much questions in your poem, a few is good, but a whole poem shouldn't just be about queations. It shoud ...

Okay, I will admit that this is a rather depressing poem. Depressing but powerful. It's also very lyrical as shadowknight155 said. I don't know why, but I started hearing it ...

Okay, this poem have a very gentle flow to it. Although third stanza seems a bit strange, since the five lines just popped out of nowhere. So, here's my suggestion: ...

Alright, to the review. You have great imagery here: I'm not a pristine glass image splayed with color and adornments. I'm a piece of shattered glass, plain, and forever broken. ...

Agreed with the last reviewers that this poem paints a vivid picture and have beautiful imagery in it. I also think that it's a very... exotic? poem. It might've something ...

Hi ehte92! You have a beautiful poem there with a message that the whole world should listen to: Everyone's unique and special, even though others might not see it. Also, ...

Have I mentioned that I loved this poem yet? If not, then, there, you've heard it. I really like this poem, because, well for one, it's structured beautifuly, they're like ...

I think that this poem wouldn't hurt with puctuations put in it. Whilst we're at grammatical errors, may I suggest that you split the poem into stanzas? It's easier to ...

Alright, first of all, you shouldn't put rhyming first in poetry. If you do, it makes the lines seemed forced and out of place. I'm not saying that you're poem ...

You have a very pleasant, charming and as you put it, innocent poem there. I can see the charm of the garden, through your eyes. The poem is also very ...

Hello nekros, You have some powerful imagery in your poem. They painted a really vivid picture in my head. However, I don't really get the story behind this. There's some ...