Hello there,
I agree with everyone that this does create a lot of vivid imagery and it has a very deep description. I always find it hard to decipher the meaning behind the words but even so I still enjoy reading the poem and indulging in the amazing language that people craft together to create poetry. I did find this really intriguing and beautiful I do hope you realise there is a lot of punctuation mistakes in this but I'm sure you can figure out waht those are for yourself. I think this is really good, keep writing.
From CuteJackRussell
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