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Re: Perfectly Content
Welcome.
Sep 11, 2013 -
Re: Lady of the Mists
OK.
Sep 11, 2013 -
Re: I need to write.
I love this. conversations in a writers head, or between other characters are always interesting. This one it so true. I feel like I want to write to teach things ...
Sep 11, 2013 -
Re: Perfectly Content
Sorry about the double comment, I meant to put it as a review.
Sep 11, 2013 -
Re: Perfectly Content
This is great. After a moment, my fingers begin moving, frantically at first, as if there is a race against time and I have no choice but to continue, to ...
Sep 11, 2013 - Re: Perfectly Content Sep 11, 2013
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Re: It's her.
You're welcome!
Sep 11, 2013 -
Re: Do You Remember? (Chapter 3)
Yeah, well good job.
Sep 11, 2013 -
Re: Do You Remember? (Chapter 1)
I know, I also read the prologue for this, I just didn't comment on it. I'l get to Devil's Touch later.
Sep 10, 2013 -
Re: Devil Touch - Prologue
So, really mysterious beginning, I'll be moving onto chapter 1.
Sep 10, 2013 -
Re: The Meaning of Life
OK, that clears up some things.
Sep 9, 2013 -
Re: The Kingdom of Boredom, Chpt. 1
I can't wait for the time when my characters become this real . . . well I think I can't. If I have any characters like Fiera it might not ...
Sep 9, 2013 -
Re: Is It a Dream? Chapter 1 Confusion
I'll look at the flower-girl part, but it is the second girl who speaks, not the flower-girl. I understand how the guard might not suspect it to a be a ...
Sep 9, 2013 -
Re: Disconnected
This was very moving poem. Your rhyming was good, your description of how close yet apart the two characters are was really good, overall a great poem. So far everything ...
Sep 6, 2013 -
Re: Journey of Sins
See Vivian, dragonphoenix can come up with way better names.
Sep 6, 2013