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hey new chapters!! I am back Kei felt his cheeks flush. “I—no! I just couldn’t sleep.” Her laugh was soft, almost teasing. “Sure, sure.” Need to split their dialogue lines ...

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Hey kid, ur not allowed back here

Verena feels very goal-oriented. I do A and then B and C which gets me to my goal of D. So yes she is learning the decorum, but she's doing ...

You're good Cats lol glitches happen @Wolfi

I dont know if it read faster ( I was deep in the newborn rocking chair while he sleeps trwnches) but I did think Sergius did a lot more interrupting ...

I think moving chapters teally depends on if there's more of Mara's backstory. If thats the only full one we get, it could be jarring? But if you said here ...

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Oh wow. Went ham. HA.

it's a bit og Good King Wenceslas mixed in with Peter

Thanks for stopping by :] I appreciate pointing out some of the boring grammatical and syntax stuff. Definitely my weakest point such as with the capitalization inconsistencies. I meant to ...

XDDDD not exactly a review but I'll take it ;p

Thanks for all the reviews Tikaya! Feel free to go back and read the first 3 if youre interested

Ah the welding of legs was juat because I had an original lije using another water metaphor and I just rhought it sounded really bad when spoken out loud lol

I somehow never saw this..... but tha k yiu for the feedback! This song was pretty personal when my wife was very pregnant and summer was ending and the resolution ...