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lol those were not world building notes, I just put them there since I dont have a pronunciation page xD same thing with the ones in chapter 1

they are actually on the same continent so I may need to remind everyone a little more of how cold it is in chapter 5 xD different biomes but still ...

I actually cut out almost 600 words on the beginning after my 2nd draft so Im really happy to hear how well that part flowed. Your thoughts on the 2nd ...

I get them being paper. But shouldn't they come kn some sort of satchel to keep them safe from prying eyes? also I meant leafed lol

There is definitely a scene where I could work it in - The Satchel but I kinda really want the entrance of the mysterious figure from the get go because ...

hey new chapters!! I am back Kei felt his cheeks flush. “I—no! I just couldn’t sleep.” Her laugh was soft, almost teasing. “Sure, sure.” Need to split their dialogue lines ...

Full legal Name im DYING

Hey kid, ur not allowed back here

Verena feels very goal-oriented. I do A and then B and C which gets me to my goal of D. So yes she is learning the decorum, but she's doing ...

You're good Cats lol glitches happen @Wolfi

I dont know if it read faster ( I was deep in the newborn rocking chair while he sleeps trwnches) but I did think Sergius did a lot more interrupting ...

I think moving chapters teally depends on if there's more of Mara's backstory. If thats the only full one we get, it could be jarring? But if you said here ...

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Oh wow. Went ham. HA.

it's a bit og Good King Wenceslas mixed in with Peter