Messenger

Yes thw conflict here needs some work because Devlin actually makes assumptions that I know but he doesn't yet xD

Haha just advanced warning the next chapter is awful so if you just wanna read it and not review it that's totally okay. It will be eradicated in later drafts ...

The part with italicized thoughts is probably courtesy of WFP by thanks for the note on that

Lol that period mistake is only outdone by 1 other thing I wrote a long time ago ahaha when the black knight uses the sword the idea is that the ...

Hey thanks for cracking on! So, a little history - Astor and Sador were brothers who founded what is now called Velvurland. It's comprised of Sadoria and Astoria, named after ...

is dire xD

Hey, thanks so much for all the useful insight. Did you go to school for music, or learn an instrument?

Yeqh can you tell I struggle with following poem rhythms %uD83D%uDE02 I actually did have to do a lot of shifting and picking specific words, but I know what you ...

Honestly I feel like you may be alone in the Carris/Gwyn dynamic xD but I will keep an eye out for that eventually I love how fascinated you are by. ...

But is it magical though?

thanks for the praise and nitpicks. I loved the first 2 seasons of Arrow and actually rewatched them this spring xD

Hey Plume thx for stopping by. As one non-poetic reviewer to another, I feel ya xD Good catch on the capitalized words. They should all be caps because I treated ...

Good advice that I'll try to keep in mind. The same technical side that I know helps me stay more focused is also the side that can bite me in ...

Fear not, Gwyn will remain a strong side character for as long as she's around. As for Miles, this is seemingly like a necessary edit both for tone and character. ...

Haha ur a machine. I wanted to go more focused povs, hence acrual thoughts being included, but sometimes I tend to still avoid exposition even though it would be fine ...