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Re: Neath Juniper's Fern
is dire xD
Sep 26, 2023 -
Re: Neath Juniper's Fern
Hey, thanks so much for all the useful insight. Did you go to school for music, or learn an instrument?
Sep 26, 2023 -
Re: Fiend of Fire and Sky
Yeqh can you tell I struggle with following poem rhythms %uD83D%uDE02 I actually did have to do a lot of shifting and picking specific words, but I know what you ...
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Re: Williwaw Chapter 32
Honestly I feel like you may be alone in the Carris/Gwyn dynamic xD but I will keep an eye out for that eventually I love how fascinated you are by. ...
Sep 14, 2023 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 30
But is it magical though?
Sep 10, 2023 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 1
thanks for the praise and nitpicks. I loved the first 2 seasons of Arrow and actually rewatched them this spring xD
Sep 8, 2023 -
Re: The Legend of the Black Bull
Hey Plume thx for stopping by. As one non-poetic reviewer to another, I feel ya xD Good catch on the capitalized words. They should all be caps because I treated ...
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Re: Williwaw Chapter 28
Good advice that I'll try to keep in mind. The same technical side that I know helps me stay more focused is also the side that can bite me in ...
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Re: Williwaw Chapter 27
Fear not, Gwyn will remain a strong side character for as long as she's around. As for Miles, this is seemingly like a necessary edit both for tone and character. ...
Sep 1, 2023 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 26
Haha ur a machine. I wanted to go more focused povs, hence acrual thoughts being included, but sometimes I tend to still avoid exposition even though it would be fine ...
Sep 1, 2023 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 24
Yeah I'm demanding myself that I finish a long form project for the first time since my very first book at 15
Sep 1, 2023 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 25
It's like getting presents %uD83D%uDE02%uD83D%uDE02%uD83D%uDE02 good points about Miles. Hopefully you like chapter 27 haha it may be a better iteration of him idk %uD83E%uDD37%u200D%u2642%uFE0F
Sep 1, 2023 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 24
I agree. I feel like you're really on my wavelength haha in the chapter where they sit on the mountainside after the dragon, I basically want to entirely re-write it ...
Sep 1, 2023 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 23
Lol maybe I should roll with Xerox. He hasn't been mentioned before so your goldfish brain is safe. And you're spot on again with Devlin's side quests lol that goes ...
Sep 1, 2023 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 23
Lol maybe I should roll with Xerox. He hasn't been mentioned before so your goldfish brain is safe. And you're spot on again with Devlin's side quests lol that goes ...
Sep 1, 2023