Messenger

I have to say that the past three chapters have been a little confusing. This one not so much, but you still have hardly any description or explanation of where ...

This is an interesting short story. At first I really wasn't sure why Cora was faking everything; why would she? It seemed almost as if she just wanted to have ...

This review is just gonna be random stuff I see along the way, and then a sum of it at the end. This had happened many times before, she had ...

Haha. This was great. Your first paragraph is really scary, it really captures the evil side of the spider. Then the description of what the spider wishes to do to ...

Malachi here to review. The third line should be silent, rather than "siler", that's just a small typo that can be easily fixed. Also, Is at the beginning of the ...

When I write, I am in control, but at the same time I am free to let the stories fall past on their own adventures. True, true, true. Writing can ...

Usually I put one section of the poem that i like most. This one just has too many. I would have to put the whole poem on my review to ...

Ah, how more perfectly true can a poem about writing poems get. I've felt this way before. poem writing can be hard. I'll have times when I want to write ...

This is another excellent poem. It's an interesting view. A very well written free-verse poem. I like that you show that it is God who is the decider, that he ...

This format is PERFECT for this poem. I love how you expressed the boy's thoughts. They are so like how it would b if this were a real meeting. And ...

WOW! Man can you write good! This is amazing! Your description, your imagery, your imagination, your description, is SO good. We imagine evil spirits pursuing us, and we engage them ...

WOW! WOW WOW WOW! What a powerful poem! I man really good. It shows the insides of some of us, and how we really are, but also it shows how ...

So this is such a short poem, yet more packed with truth then some 10+ lines. It's a hopeful poem, and I loved it. At first I read it and ...

This is a big jump from the previous chapter, but that makes me want to read more. IT seems that Tully has grown older by a couple years. I'm pretty ...

England. A country filled with peace and warmth. "Tully, please come and help with unpacking the boxes, your dad and I can't just do everything, you know." My mum called ...