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Re: Agents of Time: Chapter One; The Mansion
Looks like @Snoink went absolutely ham, but I tried to have my thoughts in order before I read it so that if any of our opinions align you know they ...
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 18
Hi rat! I've been meaning to get to this for a minute if trying to dispel the nerves coiled in his chest. Marin sat beside him, her leather jacket brushing ...
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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 17
Hey more Eternal Beauty! Mary Shelley Spring had settled over Nagano like a soft, golden veil, but its reign was waning. Late May’s heat crept into the air, bringing the ...
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Re: When a witch loves
Hi creepy. I suppose it is officially spooky booky season isnt it? Let's get into the festivities. Im a little confused by the meter and rhyming scheme of the poem. ...
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Re: The Soldiers : The Old Guard (2/3)
Hey! Back here again as promised! If part 3 is somewhere else please let me know, or feel free to tag me when you post the last part! And Avery ...
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Re: The Soldiers : Napoleon of the West (1/3)
Hey there! Stopping in for a little review on an interesting title. At first I was going to disagree with the notion that most people are rumming around being wild ...
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Re: The Quiet Things That No One Ever Knows: Chapter 1.2
Hi there! Im back for more as promised. Let's meet our newest contestant. I think Wolfi did a really good job once again of pointing some things out. I figured ...
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Re: The Quiet Things That No One Ever Knows: Chapter 1.1
Im a suckered for murder and mystery, and sticking it out in the big sky country just makes it that much better! Let's get to it. Wolfi and Orion also ...
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Re: The Sins We Inherit - 1
Hi there! I saw mystery/suspense and there isnt a ton of that on here. Im always up for a mystery, so I thought id stop by as we work through ...
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Re: Our empty bed
Hi there! Welcome to YWS! Your title and description sounded interesting so I thought id check it out. Laying alone in her bed, she kept her eyes glued to the ...
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Re: Laughing Jack and Aeliana talk about friendship
I saw Laughing Jack so I come a running. Since i saw Aelina I figured this is either more backstory or a continuation of the magic show from last night, ...
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Re: Laughing Jack gives Aeliana a show!
I saw Laughing Jack so I thought id come by for more since ei was reading about him last night. Just a few quick thoughts tonight. I would have liked ...
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Re: Laughing Jack’s proxy pledge
Hi creepy, im back for another (and maybe one more since these are so short and sweet.....we'll, at least short) When the merry-go-round goes about and around Consider changing "about" ...
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Re: Carter’s poem
Hi creepy. Trooping on through the green room so I'm back once again for revmo and Team Tortoise It was the same thing every day, why bother to listen You ...
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Re: Found but Gone
Hi Icarus! This is my first time seeing your work. Happy Review Month and go all Team Tortoises. Down by the waterfall, a pair sat. This was a sight to ...
Sep 22, 2025
