The Sins We Inherit - 1

by KaavyaK

Published September 25, 2025

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In The Sins we Inherit.

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Chapter One: The Witness

Joycine had learned early on that the truth was often buried beneath layers of lies, covered in dust and deceit, waiting for someone reckless enough to dig it out. But this story—this assignment—felt different. It was supposed to be routine. A feature on the D'Ante Corporation and its founder, Demetri D'Ante, the youngest billionaire in the country.

But everything about the D'Ante family screamed danger from the moment she stepped into their world.

It was a cold, gray morning when she first arrived at the D'Ante estate, an imposing mansion perched at the edge of the city’s wealthiest district. The sprawling estate, with its marble columns and manicured gardens, felt like a place where secrets were not just kept—they were buried.

“Ms. Joycine.” The voice that greeted her as she stepped out of her car belonged to a tall, elegant woman dressed in a sharp black suit. She extended a hand, but there was something cold about her smile.

“Welcome to D'Ante Estate. Demetri will be with you shortly.”

Joycine shook her hand, briefly wondering how much of this woman’s politeness was genuine, or if it was merely a mask. She followed the woman through the massive glass doors, the sound of their heels echoing in the cavernous foyer. The opulence of the space was suffocating. Everything was too perfect—too curated.

The woman led her into a private sitting room, its walls lined with dark wood and gleaming silver frames. Photographs of the D'Ante family in expensive suits, posing with politicians and world leaders, adorned the walls. But there was something unsettling about the way they all seemed to look at you. Every pair of eyes in those photographs was intense, predatory, like they knew something you didn’t.

Joycine sat down on the leather sofa, pulling out her notebook and pen. She had done her research on Demetri. On the surface, he was a self-made billionaire, a genius entrepreneur who had built D'Ante Corporation from the ground up. The media adored him. He was charming, cold, calculated—perfect.

But that’s not what intrigued her. What intrigued her was the whispered rumors that surrounded the D'Ante family. Whispers of shady deals, corruption, and a string of disappearances tied to their company. No one seemed to know the truth, but everyone suspected there was more to the D'Ante empire than the public knew.

The door opened, and Demetri D'Ante walked in.

Tall, broad-shouldered, with a jawline so sharp it could cut glass. His eyes—dark, almost black—locked onto hers with an intensity that made her pause. It was unsettling how easily he commanded the room, how everything about him exuded power.

“Ms. Joycine.” His voice was smooth, deliberate. “I hope you’ve found our home comfortable.”

“Quite.” She managed a smile, though her nerves were on edge. This was not what she’d expected. Everything about Demetri screamed control. The air around him seemed to hum with a quiet danger. But it was his smile—charming yet distant—that really unsettled her.

They exchanged pleasantries, and then he gestured for her to follow him.

As they walked down the hall, he spoke casually. “I’m sure you’ve heard the rumors about the D'Ante family. It’s hard to escape gossip when you're as visible as we are.”

Joycine nodded, sensing the deeper meaning behind his words. “People talk.”

He stopped in front of a heavy oak door, looking back at her. “Some truths, Ms. Joycine, are meant to stay hidden. You should be careful what you dig up.”

It was a warning. But she couldn’t back down now. She had made it this far.

He opened the door, revealing a study with floor-to-ceiling bookshelves and a massive desk. “This is where I conduct most of my work. The world is full of people who think they know everything about me. But they only know what I let them see.”

She stepped into the room, her pulse quickening. “Is that why you agreed to this interview? To set the record straight?”

He looked at her then, the glimmer of something darker flickering in his eyes. “Perhaps. Or perhaps, I just enjoy the game.”

There was a pause. Then he added, “You should also know that you’re not the first reporter to look into the D'Ante family. Many have tried, and many have failed.”

Joycine felt a chill settle into her bones. There was something about his words—something ominous. She forced herself to focus.

“I’m not here to fail, Mr. D'Ante.”

The interview began in earnest, but every answer Demetri gave seemed to lead her deeper into a labyrinth. He spoke about the corporation’s successes, the philanthropy, and the power they wielded in the business world. But when she pressed him on the rumors surrounding his family, he grew noticeably tense.

“I don’t discuss family matters with the press,” he said curtly.

Joycine pressed on. “The disappearances, the mysterious deaths connected to D'Ante Corporation—”

Demetri’s face hardened. The air shifted, and for a brief moment, the warmth of the room seemed to vanish.

“You ask dangerous questions, Ms. Joycine.”

She swallowed, trying to remain composed. This wasn’t the kind of pushback she was used to. But she was determined.

"Sometimes," she said softly, "the truth is more dangerous than the lies."

Demetri stared at her for a long moment, and then a slow, almost predatory smile curled on his lips. "You’re not as naïve as you look. But be warned—some truths are better left buried."

He stood up abruptly, the conversation clearly over. “That will be all for today, Ms. Joycine.”

She rose, but before she could turn to leave, the door swung open.

Another man stepped into the room.

Donovan D'Ante.

He was the younger brother, the younger heir of D'Ante family. And unlike Demetri, there was something raw, untamed about him. His eyes were bright, almost feverish, and when he looked at her, it was as if he could see straight through her.

“Demetri,” Donovan’s voice cut through the tension in the room. “I think she’s digging too deep.”

Demetri’s expression faltered for a brief moment, and that was enough. Joycine’s heart skipped a beat.

Donovan’s gaze lingered on her, and she couldn’t shake the feeling that this wasn’t the first time he’d seen her. There was something haunting about his stare.

“Careful, Joycine,” Donovan said, his voice low, almost a whisper. “Some things are meant to remain buried for a reason.”

Joycine froze, the weight of his words sinking in. As the door closed behind them, she realized something she hadn’t noticed before.

She was already in too deep. And now, she couldn’t back out.

Just as she made her way back to the car, a small envelope was there, tucked neatly on the left side of her car's windshield. Inside, was a single piece of paper.

"The truth will cost you more than you’re willing to pay. Keep digging and you’ll wish you hadn’t."

There was no name. No return address.

But Joycine knew—this was only the beginning.

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Hope you all liked reading this chapter.

Don't worry there is a lot to come, believe me I won't disappoint you all.

Next part coming soon!

Stay tuned!

Comments & reviews · 2
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mourronic
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mourronic wrote a review Review · Nov 9, 2025

how suspenseful!! :o

this story absolutely delivers that sleek, modern gothic energy that i think a lot of stories chase, but it is also this proper investigative thriller that i wasn't expecting when i went into it!!

joycine is a very typical protagonist as she is world-weary and sharp, someone who’s seen enough lies to recognize how deep they can go. that isn't a huge diversion from how these stories present the main character, so i was iffy at first [bleh!!], but she really ended up capturing me as the story progressed. i felt sympathetic to her in those few scenes that made her feel human, like when she was forcing herself to keep calm when threatened.

everything is just sooo cinematic as well! the gray morning, the immaculate estate, the predatory family portraits, etc. it goes well with the recurring motif of buried truth. i thought that mirrored both joycine’s work as a journalist and the family’s carefully constructed [though super fake!!] empire. after all, to quote the most quotable, some truths are better left buried :shock:

although, besides these, i did have some other thoughts :

“Ms. Joycine.” The voice that greeted her as she stepped out of her car belonged to a tall, elegant woman dressed in a sharp black suit. She extended a hand, but there was something cold about her smile.


they keep referring to her as "ms. joycine," but i was thinking if they're oh so formal and fancy, why wouldn't they use her last name?! it must be common knowledge, or at least a google search away, if she is a journalist.

"The truth will cost you more than you’re willing to pay. Keep digging and you’ll wish you hadn’t."


this is the most outrageous, in-your-face threat ever!! i know the family is wealthy and powerful, but i would imagine a journalist would have the resources to report something like this while maintaining her dignity and safety. why can't she just send this over to the police? is it mere plot convenience :wink: or rather, does it go deeper than that? are they paying off the police?

besides that, i wish you explored what this specific family means for joycine or her career. why is she getting involved with them? does she have dirt on them, or is she looking for anything special? the interview doesn't hold up for me since she shouldn't be this deeply involved after something so small and routine.

i am eager to see the next part, that's for sure!!

-- mour

Hiiii!
Thank you so much for the review and the star, I'm gonna be honest, I was determined about posting the next part when the first one would get a star, like what if people did not like so, yeah.
Also, the next part will surely answer all your queries. And trust me this story won't fail to entertain you.

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Messenger
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Messenger wrote a review Review · Sep 26, 2025

Hi there! I saw mystery/suspense and there isnt a ton of that on here. Im always up for a mystery, so I thought id stop by as we work through Happy Review Month! I also see that you've been here for over a year but ive not seen your name before, until now, so I very belated welcome, and happy to see that YWS has been good to you for you to stick around. Anyway. To the story!

I like the pace. Detailed enough for ke to see it in my head, but not too bogged down in particulars that probably wont matter later. I could have used a tiiiny bit more description of the grounds, but all in all not a big deal.
As for the characters, I get that there is a heavy theme.if sinister motives and methods under a guise of philanthropy and benevolence and hard work. Perhaps more of that could come through in the way they talk. Joycine is so ready for a cold shoulder and avoidance, and instead finds herself almost on edge because it seems too nice. Then again, she is there without a camera in their most comfortable place, so maybe some of the mask slips.

I would have liked to see a bit more who Joycine works for and what she is hoping to get out of the interview/story. Is this a personal vendetta? Does she work for a news network? Is someone paying her to investigate?

Lastly, there is some repitition in here. I almost felt beaten over the head that Dante is powerful and avoiding the real questions. And Donovan is very similar. But Demetri also seemed to bring it up on his own. And why would he want to let someone into his.inner sanctum if he has things to hide and doesn't like prying eyes? What pressure is on him to acquiesce to interviews in his own home?
The note really felt.over the too considering she had JUST been told by Donovan that she was digging too deep, and that's on top of Joycine already being pretty set in stone about her beliefs on the Dante's as a whole. Why write an ominous note when you've already threatened her twice?

Overall I am intrigued. I love a good mystery, and im all for seeing a crime family get taken apart slowly and hopefully cleverly! Let me know when chapter 2 comes out. Oh, and I really liked your heading with the chapter title in bold and lined. Yaya for chapter titles

~Messy

I thought no one would even see or give their inputs on this story, but you did. Thank you so much Messenger, that means a lot.



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