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Malachi here to review on one of the best short stories I've ever read. What can I say? Your accuracy and precision in explaining every little detail is so awesome. ...

So this is such a short poem, yet more packed with truth then some 10+ lines. It's a hopeful poem, and I loved it. At first I read it and ...

Hahahahahha. This story is so random and strange that it's very funny. I laughed especially when he asked the teacher what the question meant. Her response and his thoughts were ...

This was a pretty good poem. I like how you come back to the phrase : Past the clouds that gather in herds, To the beautiful setting sun. That's a ...

I couldn't go more than a few sentences. I'm sorry but this just doesn't make sense. It'd totally wrong. No one, NO ONE, instantly decides to kidnap some random kids ...

Here are a few of your sentences, re-done wit the correct punctuation. I swinted at him I squinted at him. "Yea" I remarked "Yeah!" I remarked, "It is!" collage!" college!" ...

There is one major problem with this story. You MUST have spaces between dialogue lines and other lines. Every time a dialogue line begins it must start on a new ...

Whoa! I was reading the first sentence and BOOM! the perspective changes from third to first person just like that. I would suggest keeping it on one perspective. If you ...

It's hard to find anything wrong with such a flawless piece of art. So my review will just be more of a congratulations for such a well written and well ...

Wow! hahahahaha. This was GREAT! From the beginning I was either smiling or laughing, due to your confusingly predictable (or is it unpredictable due to you trying to be predictable ...

I have to say that the past three chapters have been a little confusing. This one not so much, but you still have hardly any description or explanation of where ...

This is an interesting short story. At first I really wasn't sure why Cora was faking everything; why would she? It seemed almost as if she just wanted to have ...

This review is just gonna be random stuff I see along the way, and then a sum of it at the end. This had happened many times before, she had ...

Haha. This was great. Your first paragraph is really scary, it really captures the evil side of the spider. Then the description of what the spider wishes to do to ...

Malachi here to review. The third line should be silent, rather than "siler", that's just a small typo that can be easily fixed. Also, Is at the beginning of the ...