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Knight Malachi here to review for Review Day. This was good thinking over when I first read this Michael. I love starting it in the middle of the action, and ...

Knight Malachi here to review for the Knights of the Green Room, as well as for Review Day. So this is an interesting start. I would suggest more detail, especially ...

Here for review #2. The next bit is pretty good. I am glad that she finally broke out of their. i noticed a couple words jammed together. I believe one ...

Knight Malachi here for KotGR and Review Day! I will put any problem i see here, and then put a summary at the end. 1.So, the beginning grabs the reader's ...

Knight Malachi here, 5 minutes before Review day begins. so I was laughing the whole, i mean whole time. This was so funny, especially the way you formatted it. Great ...

Knight Malachi here too review for the Knights of the Green Room. So when I saw this title and the description I was pretty hyped up. I thought there was ...

Knight Malachi here to review as a Knight of the Green Room. first off, I am leaving the technical reviewing part to my fellow knight, Dragon. He will gladly find ...

Knight Malachi here to review. I can't say that I am especially surprised to read this. What place is more favorite to a writer then a place where he/she can ...

Knight Malachi here to review you. By the way, are you a Green Room Squire? So this poem was really well done. I like all of the opposites you had. ...

Knight Malachi here to review. so this is obviously not a poem with a real deep meaning. But it was fun to read, easy to read, and if there are ...

Knight Malachi here to review for the Knights of the Green Room. So this is a truthful message. Thankfully in my church I do not see this, but I know ...

Knight Malachi of the Green Room Knights, here to review. So this was a beautiful poem. I loved your imagery and descriptive language. It was a very nice message. You ...

Knight Malachi hahaha here to hahaha review. So this is a fast, short, funny poem. And one that isn't so unrealistic. (Inside joke) I love your character's attitude, as well ...

Knight Malachi here to review. So this was rhyming well until the Death Valley line. Suddenly it didn't rhyme for a couple lines, and threw me off, as well as ...

Knight Malachi here to review take two. This was so much better. It allowed the reader to understand fully where and what was going on, as well as not having ...