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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Adventures at Evening (experimentation with iambic pentameter)

    Knight Malachi here to review for the KotGR So number one thing I have to say is that when I saw every line rhymed my mouth went :OOOO I was ...

    Oct 1, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Perfect: Chapter 1

    Knight Malachi here to Review for the Knights of the green Room. This is the only error I saw. It should be him instead of his. All of us look ...

    Oct 1, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Cat's Quest-Ch 1

    Knight Malachi here to review for KotGR. So, I saw a few typos, but my apologies I can't re-find them. Anyway, I found one or two punctuation problems as well, ...

    Oct 1, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Fantasy Re: Dying Embers

    Knight Malachi here to review. I probably would've this sooner, had I not missed it in the green room. Now, onto the review. I agree with Griffin about your detail ...

    Sep 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: A Night to Remember - Chapter 5

    Knight Malachi here to review for the Knights of the Green Room. First off I would like to say that I liked being able to understand what was going on, ...

    Sep 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Foxtrot

    Knight Malachi here to review So this poem was a cool poem. I really liked reading it. It seemed like a pretty light and fun poem at first, but as ...

    Sep 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Teen Fiction Re: Removing The Mask ~ Chapter One

    Hi, I was going to review this, but when I saw how long it was I said uh-uh. This too long. Sorry, but I know of only 2 or 3 ...

    Sep 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Satire, Literature Re: Princess.

    Knight Malachi here to review for KotGR So I loved this poem. I liked what it was about, and how you completed the story. Going from what a princess usually ...

    Sep 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Desperado

    Knight Malachi here to review for KotGR So this poem was very well written, very well described and had a lot of metaphoric language in it which was good, but ...

    Sep 30, 2013
  • Art » Spiritual, Other Re: Those Sidelines Matter

    Knight Malachi here to resume work for the Knights of the Green Room I noticed one little mistake right away. not a big one though. The period here should be ...

    Sep 30, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Welcome To Hell

    Knight Malachi here to review. So Dragon swept the problems into one review, and I will tell you what I thought of the context. It was very descriptive, and easy ...

    Sep 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Tricks

    Knight Malachi with the Knights of the Green Room here to review for you. So I had to re-read this poem to get it. But don't take that as a ...

    Sep 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: I am me

    Knight Malachi here to review, trying to clean up the Green Room. So this is a really cool format. I liked it, and there aren't a lot of poems wit ...

    Sep 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: What day is it?

    Knight Malachi here, exhausted, weary, yet super-duper excited after Review Day. This is a great poem to capture what I, along with all the other contestants went through. Hats off ...

    Sep 30, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Martin

    Knight Malachi here to review with less than 3 minutes to go for Review Day. This was a nice little poem about something so simple-a pond- and yet you turned ...

    Sep 30, 2013


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