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The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGr. Happy Review Day!!!! Use your eyes of cells, atoms, electrons, protons Open and see That everything and everyone Aren't that different after ...

The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. Here on Review Day!!!! I will build a house in the woods, let me accompany the silence, I think you should change ...

The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGr. Happy Review Day!!!!:) So, I recall reading some romantic poetry a few weeks ago that I immensely enjoyed, and I don't think ...

The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. Happy Review Day!!!!:) So, I liked this a lot. Having the recurring lines of "They whisper let us in . . . ...

The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. And you are my first reviewer on Review Day!! So, right of the bat I noticed that you have no capitalization. That ...

The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. “Ugh,” he muttered, I don't think 'ugh' goes well in this line. Maybe add he groaned, but I think ugh just sounds ...

The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. Do I dare look behind me, dare see if I have any chance of escape, or do I give into the fear ...

The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. So, Iggy got some of the main points, but I feel kind of . . empty after this. I think you have ...

The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. So, Disk got most of the stuff on the line-by-line, although I didn't read it all, so forgive me if this was ...

The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. so, this is a chilling line Shabbily dressed children stood silently holding luggage, every bone in their frail bodies pronounced, a dead ...

The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. Oh goodie, another one?!?! *Is delighted* Onto the review. A miracle working God I think you could put a dash to connect ...

The Messenger Knight here to review for you! So, finally got to this. I see you got some good reviews though, so happy about that. Now, onto my own. so ...

The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. So, I have been faithfully following your posts and loved this one just like all of your others. This is almost written ...

The Messenger Knight here to review for you and the KotGR. So first off, glad to see this up after hearing about it and trying to help you decided your ...

The Messenger Knight here to review. So, the beginning was awesome, and although obviously you were trying to make it metaphoric, that can be done wrong. You executed it perfectly. ...