Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
The faceless men entered the room. The silver guard required the password to enter, and was pleasured with their sinful fingers. The room was dead and produced a smell mixed with fear and urine. The room erupted with screams and cries of mercy as the faceless three hovered in.
The noise that poured from his orifice was hindered by the protests of the dying.
Okay, the description there of "sinful fingers' kind of sounded a little bit awkward to me, but besides that, this is a pretty neat little start to a story here, we have sort of "faceless figures" hovering into some random room past a guard, the whole faceless thing really adds a lovely touch of extra mystery here, but then it looks like whatever they came in for causes a lot of just straight up death and suffering here, and that makes things even more interesting here with some form of weird noise also coming from what I assume is guard. All in all, a pretty intense and quite mysterious opening sequence here.
Papers were shuffled and arguments were wheezing out of their mouths.
Two large orbs were tracing the room, screaming at the site of the faceless three. The eyes could not shut, yet they failed to produce the arid sensation associated with the sensitive exposure to the acid like air. The small consciousness was detached, only for the surgical pipes that allowed it to linger on in a static prose. The tufts of fur were stained crimson and already started to produce that rich odor of decay initiated by the lack of correct paperwork.
Okay, well that is a very interesting set of descriptions there...looks like there's a very set of characters going on here, with the whole orbs and things being described here. The whole faceless aspect of things appears to have a lot more to it than meets the eye here.
All in all, this was a very interesting piece to read here, quite a lot of things appear to be going on here and well, it certainly seems to be the type of story that I would in fact read here.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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