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Re: i rule da streetz
Well besides the fact hat I don't understand most of this, I will give you a short review. Well bloodlink covered just about every line. I'll try to be a ...
Jan 6, 2014 -
Re: One Day
The Messenger here to review. So! Grammar, punctuation, all that stuff is in tip-top shape so I won't speak of that. The content is even better. They way in which ...
Dec 31, 2013 -
Re: Bound by Guilt [Chapter I]
The Messenger here to review. So! “For how long?!” Not sure how I feel about the ?! part. I could already tell from the previous lines that Axel was angry, ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: The Assassin - Chapter 1 - Part 2
The Messenger here to do a bit of reviewing. So! The beginning (I haven't read chapter 1, sorry) is very insightful. I feel like I am in the chase, even ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Devastation in Tears
Messenger here to review and it will be my second review of this crazy World Wide Review Day. So! So this "handled" really well. Or it flowed really well. The ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: The Pack - Chapter Four - Newt
The Messenger here to do my first review. So! OK I immediately realized that this was written much unlike the other chapters. And I mean that in a very good ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Here Be Dragon
This was amazing, it really was. I loved the bond that grew between the two characters It was quite humorous as well. There were a few typos (apologies for not ...
Dec 16, 2013 -
Re: Devil Touch - Chapter Six
The Messenger Knight, here to review for KotGR. She felt as something wet hit her brow, warm and sticky. Delete the bold, unnecessary word. Gentleman like in a manner. Add ...
Dec 12, 2013 -
Re: When he knows he isn't coming home
The Messenger Knight here to review Oh wow! That was powerful. This is a beautiful piece, and it is sadly all true. I think this piece is a great tribute ...
Dec 4, 2013 -
Re: Endless: Part IX
Hi, The Messenger Knight here to review for you as usual. So, I went into this heart-pumping, but I felt like this chapter contained too much to be so short, ...
Dec 3, 2013 -
Re: Endless: Part VIII
The Knight Messenger here to review for KotGR So happy to see you back on here and posting! I love the length of your chapters. It helps the reader to ...
Nov 18, 2013 -
Re: Spooky Story
the Messenger Knight here to review. OK,m so you really did fool me with this. Even when I saw how short it is but hadn't read it, I was thinking ...
Oct 29, 2013 -
Re: Song: Silently
The Messenger Knight here to review for you, as promised. So if I see anything I think could be fixed I will list it below. First off: "Why does it ...
Oct 29, 2013 -
Re: The Unforgiven Destiny:Prolouge
The Messenger Knight here to review for you. Happy Review Day!!! so, I am not sure why this is all in italic. It might have been formatting problems, which I ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Clothes
The Messenger here to review for you Snoink! Happy Review Day!!! Hehehehehe. That was funny. Sounds like stories I've heard, and siblings I have with such problems. Very funny haiku ...
Oct 27, 2013