Messenger

Messenger here for you again! Happy Review Day! The only way into the castle was a drawbridge that was never brought down unless Baron Harold needed to leave, How do ...

Messenger here for ya! Oh and no reviews so far so I can get extra points! Happy Review Day. “Please, my Baron,” begged Councilman Onskel Aldemaw, his gaunt face pleading ...

Messenger to review for ya again! I'm sticking with you. As he reached the doors of Oldver’s quarters, Arryn paused when he heard the yelling of Oldver and an unfamiliar ...

Hey! Messenger here for ya! This was great! I loved how you begin. It intrigues the reader immediately. You pose questions we now want answered. Who is the woman? Who ...

Messenger here for ya again! He looked to his left and saw a rotting corpse. He looked to his right and saw bars. The soldiers had thrown him into Whiteholt’s ...

Hey, I liked it Magenta. Few lines that seems too long though: Best of luck I wish to you and you. Just write you once and remove the "and". It ...

The Messenger here to review for ya, because I saw rhia's emotional review. And she had good cause for it. This was a sad and yet happy story. I love ...

Heya, Messenger here for ya! This will be a short review, simply because there isn't really much to nitpick on, Basically everything looks in order. I like the idea behind ...

Messenger here for ya! Wow! That was amazing. The transitioning between the two characters really improved the story. I figured all along what was going to happen, but I would ...

Messenger here for you . I saw this back when it was in the green room but didn't take the time to review it. Now I am! This was actually ...

Messenger here for ya! I was just meandering in your portfolio and came across this. The first few lines caught my attention so I had to read it. And it ...

Messenger here for ya, as requested! . . . hastily scraped his muddy boots on the doormat outside his home, . . . still hopelessly covered in mud as he ...

Horrendous found this funny, but I didn't. Particularly the part about the kids who need food and water. That is a very real sad thing that is going on, and ...

Hiya! Messenger here to review for ya! which put our family into a state not of panic, but of preparation; This line seems kind of messed up. The part about ...

Messenger here to review for ya! I was really happy to see another song up by you, because I hadn't seen any in a while it seemed like. So, review: ...