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Back for Round Two! Just a quick note again about tense, and I won't being it up again. We've got past where it should be and present where it should ...

Happy Review Day fellow Pumkin! It seems that Minerva would get straight to the point, so I will as well. Let's check out a few things. 1. Tense - not ...

Happy Review Day fellow Pumpkin ;) I don't know what it is, but the poetry today is so mixed with beauty and grief xD no happy poems for me I ...

Hey there, and Happy Reciew Day from team Punpkin Pie Orange! I've got a few thoughts on this opening chapter, so let's hop in. 1. I actually love your opening ...

Hey there and Happy Review Day! There's a lot going on I'm this poem, and some interesting themes that are at war with each other. I like the progression from ...

Hey there! Happy Review Day :) let's get spookin' I've been meaning to write a short story for Halloween and have failed to do so, but it seems that you ...

Hey there! Happy Review Day! Your blurb and title caught my eye. So I thought I'd get a ticket and catch a flick while I was in town. I'm not ...

Hey there! Welcome, welcome, welcome and Happy Review Day! Let's hop right in, ya?! On the macro, welcome to ever writing anything xD This entire thing is me when I ...

Ugh I am so in love with your style already. I'm not even a naturally poetic person, and don't always review poetry on here because I don't feel like I'm ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS and Happy Review Day! I don't know if this was intentional, or just YWS messing with your spacing, but I think that having 0 stanzas, ...

Hey there! Happy Review Day and welcome to YWS :) Let's hop in, shall we? In the first line I believe a comma is in order after "I walk". In ...

Hey there, and happy review day! Right off the bat, I love the drywall analogy. It's also interesting that whereas you would expect the person being touched to be the ...

Hey there! The title and description intrigued me, and I was not disappointed. As an overall, I really love this piece. I love the WWI setting, I've always found it ...

I'm back with one more for ya! Let's hop in. The rest of the school day passed drearily This is another good example of -ly words. Dreary usually carries the ...

Bonjour la verde It was Monday and the three of them were at the school library, supposedly planning their quest. LOL every group project ever in high school "But what ...