Messenger

Let's do this. One. Last. Time. I really have been enjoying these. I do think that a girl with pink hair would've stood out more in the last chapter though, ...

Oh man! Bonus content; I'm so in. Hahaha those first few sentences rang so true to me as someone who has a bit of PTSD from an intersection where I ...

Back to finish this off. Wow. I didn't expect this to punch as hard as it did. I knew Lina was likely going to die to sacrifice herself for the ...

Eh, why not wrap this thing up in one day ha! Alright, everything is coming crashing down together at one time. We've had a decent amount of build-up to this ...

Two for One ain't bad, right? Let's get to it. One thing that you may want to keep in mind if you intend to do more short stories, is that ...

Hey, Messy back again. I didn't have any big grammar or prose complaints so just some overall thoughts today. Starting off this chapter you took all the tension out of ...

Hi, Messy here. For reviews I read through, commenting in chronological order as I find stuff so hopefully it's easy for you to track :) Their faces were still, and ...

Hey, Messy here! Right off that bat, I like this story. It's the complete opposite tone of the last P4P story I read which had a comedic tone, so switching ...

Hey, Messy here! Let's hop into this review. Overall I like this story. I like the almost whimsical mysticism, very much like ACC has throughout its pages. There's a feeling ...

And I'm to the last one you have posted! Messy is back Wait, is this the end? I'm not actually opposed to that if it's the case. I like the ...

Hey, MEssy here again WHoooooooa. Hooold up, park the bus, pause the movie!!! This is so fast. Okay, let's work through it a little slower. 1) The fight scene at ...

Hey, Messy back for more OKAY! This is a better chapter. At least, I think so. There's some decent dialogue, an intriguing end, and some more cool tech stuff which ...

Hey, Messy here with another review for ya 1. I have a couple of positives from this chapter I thought I should point out. "For a second there I thought ...

Hey, Messy here again before I pop off to bed Dreamy already pointed out some of the grammatical errors that I was going to, and since I was pretty thorough ...

Hey, Messy here I noticed that you have a couple of works in the green room going pretty far back, and that doesn't seem right to me! So let's review ...