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hi there! Happy Review Day and Happy Holidays! What an intriguing title... I feel it ironic how a company founded on the production of baby soap stumbled across the means ...

hey, I'm back for more! I read chapter 1 but skipped to here to review for Review Day, but I did want to note that this had far fewer nitpicks ...

Hi there! Messy here on review day - happy holidays :) I really like your tone in this opening chapter. I think you convey Deinara's voice very well at times. ...

Hi Vampire! I don't mind some supernatural sleuthing so here I am. I do like the vibe of this piece. It has a fun combination of Hardy Boys/Nancy Drew and ...

Hi there :) Let's jump right in! I debated pulling actual quotes as I read but I think when it comes to the nitpicky side I'll just touch on a ...

Hi there! here to give this piece some Green Room love! Whoa. This is so cool. I don't even know how to describe it except that this feels like the ...

hello there! Green Room Knight Messy here in the darkest moments you were my guide. little did I know it was your hands covering my eyes i really like this ...

Hey there. The title caught my eye. The poem did not disappoint. So, a little bit of context: I may or may not have an entire, serious, and just as ...

Hi there. Welcome to YWS! Let's take a look at what you've got here :) And yes, the weed was laced with meth, and when we found out my mother ...

Hey there and welcome to YWS :) It has been here as long as I have. At first we did notice its presence. I believe you meant to say that ...

Hi there, here for a little review :) I love the imagery of this poem. The cosmos is such a fun environment to frame any story in, and can be ...

Hi there! You asked me a while back for a review and I'm here at least. I really do apologize about the delay, but I think there's a lot to ...

I was about to be done for the evening, but then I saw the title of this poem, and I thought "There's no way I don't at least do myself ...

Hey, I liked your first poem so I thought I would stop by for more :) So, I really like this poem as well. There's this whole untold story that ...

Hey there! I came to poetry with fantasy, not totally sure of what I would find, but this is the second poem I'm reviewing, and I am absolutely loving the ...