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That is very true. Also very short. You really need to give people more to review when you post stuff.

Yeah, I was thinking of expanding this. Probably not into novel length though, I don't think it could get anywhere near there.

The Lightning Thief The Subtle Knife Catching Fire

And don't worry, when they speak of the forest they mostly mean packs of wolves, and sometimes bears. Typically, a wolf will only attack a human if it is starving ...

No, I've never played D&D. As for why I made it, it was just sort of an impulse write.

Karsten is one of the best reviewers on this board. I suggest you listen to her. I'd just like to add that constructive criticism (which is what our comments are) ...

I don't know your writing style or whats easier for you but I would try writing first person like if your the girl in the story. It would help put ...

The Mirror of Merlin and The Fires of Merlin. And there's also another amazing book. It's called Maradonia and the Seven Bridges. It is so wonderful! [/extremesarcasm]

Brisingr By far the brickiest and most boring of the Inheritance Cycle so far.

Whoa. That right there was amazing. I could almost hear it playing in my head.

Claiming what, exactly?

That's awesome. Where?

His Dark Materials - Phillip Pullman The Hunger Games/Catching Fire - Suzanne Collins Ender's Game - Orson Scott Card

I can't believe nobody is getting the Cthulhu references. (This was awesome, by the way.) I know what Cthulhu is, it just didn't seem to make much sense.

I think it would be funny if you continued this, and then had his family actually kidnapped by ninjas.