MeherazulAzim16

Hey, thanks for the review. Love the wordplay! It's a thing with me. I always mess up the comma bit. 'Talking heads.' Just learned the phrase and I can see ...

Hi, Liberty! I understand the pacing issue. I'll try to work on it. Honestly, I sort of rushed it. About the tense changes%u2014in my mind, it went from past to ...

Thanks for the review, Sofie! I understand what you said and I agree! The pacing could've been better. Thanks again for your time!!

It is indeed a LOVELY poem!

thanks a lot, anngelalu!

Um.. I dont know what to say.. I can really relate to this.. I believe I'm not the only one though.. I really loved it!

Thanks!! ^_^

Thanks a lot, Memo! But, well, I think I'll let them stay in the rain for as long as they want, who knows how long they have left... let them ...

Well, thanks! Great to know you enjoyed the poem! Yes, it actually is a kind a poem that's 'kiddish yet thought provoking'. It's something that might make the readers confused, ...

I kept having goosebumps as I read it... I.. I really don't know what to say.. I'm speechless..

I loved this lullaby.. I'll see if I can sing it, it was very good! Keep it up, buddy!

Thanks a lot, Kaos! I'll check out those things. Have an awesome day!

Thanks a lot, Inspirus! :) That means a lot to me! :)

okay! hehe I guess, I went too deep into it!!

Hi! I liked it! Seems like a slow start to an extra-ordinary story! Raindrop already helped you with a few errors that were there! I cannot wait for more! Keep ...