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Re: Demons
Hey there, I'm here for a quick review! So, I don't really understand this poem, but that might just be because you apparently based it off of a dream and ...
Sep 5, 2015 -
Re: translation
Hey hey, I'm here for a review, and if this review is terrible, I apologize in advance because I haven't reviewed poetry for a while. So honestly, this is a ...
Sep 4, 2015 -
Re: Faith - Chapter Six
All right. :D Let's crack straight on with this. IT'S THE DOCTOR AND SHERLOCK!!!! Okay, I've calmed down now. As OliveDreams already pointed out, your description here is excellent. You ...
Sep 4, 2015 -
Re: Faith - Chapter Five
Hey there! Let's dive right into it. :D Stuff I liked: The Doctor's finally shown up! Yay! And it's 11! (He's my favorite.) And your mention of the TARDIS noise ...
Sep 3, 2015 -
Re: Faith - Chapter Four
Hey hey! Back for another review! Overall This part is a good continuation of the last, and you do a great job portraying Charles' emotions as he finds out about ...
Sep 2, 2015 -
Re: Faith - Chapter Three
*Giggles delightedly* I just want to jump in there and tell him it's the TARDIS. So, another good part! Now I understand why his father was so upset - it ...
Sep 2, 2015 -
Re: Faith - Chapter Two
Hey will! I'm finally getting started on reviewing all these for you. I decided not to do chapter one, since I really don't have a lot to say about it, ...
Sep 1, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 1
Hey there! I quite like this start to a novel. Being a lover of fantasy, I think it's great that you've decided to portray the demons/monsters as the protagonists. It ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: Dreamscapes (Chapter 1: The Crescentheim Assault)
Hey hey! This is really interesting. If you post more, make sure to keep me updated because I want to read it. Now, on to the review. So, you've got ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: Apparition: The Game - Ch. 4.2
Hey there! I'm back for another review. :) Honestly, I don't think this part and the last one should be split up. I know you probably just did that because ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: Apparition: The Game - Ch. 4.1
Hey hey, let's get right to it. So, you say this is pretty rough. Regardless, it's really not that bad. It's clearly only a piece of the scene, but at ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: Apparition: The Game - Ch. 3.1
Hey hey! I'm here to finally get started on reviewing these for you. I might go back and do the earlier ones later, but I figured I'd get these out ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: Home
Hey there! Thanks for requesting a review, and I'm sorry I took so long to get around to it. Life got unexpectedly busy. But I'm here now! Let's start with ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: chapter 3 of The Token
Hey there! I'm here for the review you requested. I skimmed through the first couple of chapters, but I may have missed something, so bear with me. You've got a ...
Aug 25, 2015 -
Re: Norse Creation Narrative
Hey there! Thanks for requesting a review in my review thread. I'm not at all familiar with Norse mythology, so bear that in mind through the review. First off, I ...
Aug 25, 2015
