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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Demons

    Hey there, I'm here for a quick review! So, I don't really understand this poem, but that might just be because you apparently based it off of a dream and ...

    Sep 5, 2015
  • Other » General, General Re: translation

    Hey hey, I'm here for a review, and if this review is terrible, I apologize in advance because I haven't reviewed poetry for a while. So honestly, this is a ...

    Sep 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fanfiction Re: Faith - Chapter Six

    All right. :D Let's crack straight on with this. IT'S THE DOCTOR AND SHERLOCK!!!! Okay, I've calmed down now. As OliveDreams already pointed out, your description here is excellent. You ...

    Sep 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fanfiction Re: Faith - Chapter Five

    Hey there! Let's dive right into it. :D Stuff I liked: The Doctor's finally shown up! Yay! And it's 11! (He's my favorite.) And your mention of the TARDIS noise ...

    Sep 3, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Science Fiction Re: Faith - Chapter Four

    Hey hey! Back for another review! Overall This part is a good continuation of the last, and you do a great job portraying Charles' emotions as he finds out about ...

    Sep 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Faith - Chapter Three

    *Giggles delightedly* I just want to jump in there and tell him it's the TARDIS. So, another good part! Now I understand why his father was so upset - it ...

    Sep 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Faith - Chapter Two

    Hey will! I'm finally getting started on reviewing all these for you. I decided not to do chapter one, since I really don't have a lot to say about it, ...

    Sep 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Chapter 1

    Hey there! I quite like this start to a novel. Being a lover of fantasy, I think it's great that you've decided to portray the demons/monsters as the protagonists. It ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Dreamscapes (Chapter 1: The Crescentheim Assault)

    Hey hey! This is really interesting. If you post more, make sure to keep me updated because I want to read it. Now, on to the review. So, you've got ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: Apparition: The Game - Ch. 4.2

    Hey there! I'm back for another review. :) Honestly, I don't think this part and the last one should be split up. I know you probably just did that because ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: Apparition: The Game - Ch. 4.1

    Hey hey, let's get right to it. So, you say this is pretty rough. Regardless, it's really not that bad. It's clearly only a piece of the scene, but at ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: Apparition: The Game - Ch. 3.1

    Hey hey! I'm here to finally get started on reviewing these for you. I might go back and do the earlier ones later, but I figured I'd get these out ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Home

    Hey there! Thanks for requesting a review, and I'm sorry I took so long to get around to it. Life got unexpectedly busy. But I'm here now! Let's start with ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Technology Re: chapter 3 of The Token

    Hey there! I'm here for the review you requested. I skimmed through the first couple of chapters, but I may have missed something, so bear with me. You've got a ...

    Aug 25, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Norse Creation Narrative

    Hey there! Thanks for requesting a review in my review thread. I'm not at all familiar with Norse mythology, so bear that in mind through the review. First off, I ...

    Aug 25, 2015


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