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Re: Chiravian Knights - Chapter 2
Hey there! I'm here to get this out of the Green Room for you. Full disclosure: I read your prologue earlier, but unfortunately I'm crunched for time, so I don't ...
Sun Sep 27, 2015 11:10 am -
Re: Apparition: The Game - Ch. 7
And now a slightly slower paced chapter! That's actually really nice - it gives your readers time to recover. Luke So, I'm not so sure how much I like Luke. ...
Sun Sep 27, 2015 8:01 am -
Re: Apparition: The Game - Ch. 6.2
Wow. That was intense. I'm loving this so much. And I'm really tired, so if this review makes no sense, I apologize. I really like the direction you're taking this, ...
Sun Sep 27, 2015 6:39 am -
Re: Faith - Chapter Seven
Hey will! I'm here for another review! (And Phoenix, your deduction scene is awesome.) This chapter makes me so happy. Like really, it does. The Doctor and Sherlock! So awesome. ...
Sat Sep 26, 2015 11:51 am -
Re: Waltz With me
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this lovely little piece. I really, really like this. It seems like a lot of love poetry is really dramatic and ...
Fri Sep 25, 2015 10:57 am -
Re: Bambi
Hey there! I'm here for a fairly quick review. So, to be honest, I don't really understand this poem. I like the atmosphere, but I don't really understand what's going ...
Thu Sep 24, 2015 4:29 am -
Re: A Falling of Words
Hey hey! I'm here for a review on this. So, flash fiction! I haven't really written much flash fiction, but I know it's hard to condense a story down to ...
Wed Sep 23, 2015 10:44 am -
Re: Damn Near Burnt
Ooh, I really like this. It's so very intense, and the imagery is amazing. I really only have a few suggestions. Stanzas There are a couple places I think you ...
Wed Sep 23, 2015 8:50 am -
Re: Every Christmas - Chapter 3
Hey there! I'm here to review for you again. Thanks for tagging me! Plot So far, you seem to pretty much be throwing everything in here. So far, we've got ...
Wed Sep 23, 2015 1:17 am -
Re: I
Hey there! I'm here for a review on this lovely little short piece. Honestly, I think this poem is really powerful. It makes its point well in such a short ...
Tue Sep 22, 2015 12:49 am -
Re: Disputatores- Chapter 2
Hey, you were supposed to tag me when this came out! Please tag me in the future! Anyway, on to the review. So, this was mostly exposition, but I don't ...
Sun Sep 20, 2015 3:22 pm -
Re: His Sweet Embrace
Hey there! I'm here for a review, and if it's a bit shorter than usual, I apologize, since I am really crunched for time. So, first off, this is really ...
Sat Sep 19, 2015 1:08 pm -
Re: Every Christmas - Chapter 2
Hey hey, I'm here for a fairly short review, since it's super-late for me. So first off, I love Doctor Who fanfiction, and this is just pure fun. That being ...
Sat Sep 19, 2015 2:48 am -
Re: topics concerning being wasted and trust
Hey hey, I'm here to get this out of the green room for you! So, this is a rather interesting little piece. I confess that I haven't been following your ...
Fri Sep 18, 2015 1:10 am -
Re: Endangered
Hey there! Thanks for requesting a review in my review thread. Now, this is a pretty short poem, and I'n not sure how much I've got to say, so this ...
Thu Sep 17, 2015 2:29 pm
