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Re: Apparition: The Game - Ch. 7
And now a slightly slower paced chapter! That's actually really nice - it gives your readers time to recover. Luke So, I'm not so sure how much I like Luke. ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Apparition: The Game - Ch. 6.2
Wow. That was intense. I'm loving this so much. And I'm really tired, so if this review makes no sense, I apologize. I really like the direction you're taking this, ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Faith - Chapter Seven
Hey will! I'm here for another review! (And Phoenix, your deduction scene is awesome.) This chapter makes me so happy. Like really, it does. The Doctor and Sherlock! So awesome. ...
Sep 26, 2015 -
Re: Waltz With me
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this lovely little piece. I really, really like this. It seems like a lot of love poetry is really dramatic and ...
Sep 25, 2015 -
Re: Bambi
Hey there! I'm here for a fairly quick review. So, to be honest, I don't really understand this poem. I like the atmosphere, but I don't really understand what's going ...
Sep 24, 2015 -
Re: A Falling of Words
Hey hey! I'm here for a review on this. So, flash fiction! I haven't really written much flash fiction, but I know it's hard to condense a story down to ...
Sep 23, 2015 -
Re: Damn Near Burnt
Ooh, I really like this. It's so very intense, and the imagery is amazing. I really only have a few suggestions. Stanzas There are a couple places I think you ...
Sep 23, 2015 -
Re: Every Christmas - Chapter 3
Hey there! I'm here to review for you again. Thanks for tagging me! Plot So far, you seem to pretty much be throwing everything in here. So far, we've got ...
Sep 23, 2015 -
Re: I
Hey there! I'm here for a review on this lovely little short piece. Honestly, I think this poem is really powerful. It makes its point well in such a short ...
Sep 22, 2015 -
Re: Disputatores- Chapter 2
Hey, you were supposed to tag me when this came out! Please tag me in the future! Anyway, on to the review. So, this was mostly exposition, but I don't ...
Sep 20, 2015 -
Re: His Sweet Embrace
Hey there! I'm here for a review, and if it's a bit shorter than usual, I apologize, since I am really crunched for time. So, first off, this is really ...
Sep 19, 2015 -
Re: Every Christmas - Chapter 2
Hey hey, I'm here for a fairly short review, since it's super-late for me. So first off, I love Doctor Who fanfiction, and this is just pure fun. That being ...
Sep 19, 2015 -
Re: topics concerning being wasted and trust
Hey hey, I'm here to get this out of the green room for you! So, this is a rather interesting little piece. I confess that I haven't been following your ...
Sep 18, 2015 -
Re: Endangered
Hey there! Thanks for requesting a review in my review thread. Now, this is a pretty short poem, and I'n not sure how much I've got to say, so this ...
Sep 17, 2015 -
Re: Listen, Love
Hey there, I'm here for a quick review. So, this is really very nice. I really like it. Your message is nice and clear, that the narrator is in love ...
Sep 16, 2015
