I think, for those of us who don't know who Clara is and thus place this story within the Doctor Who timeline, you should clarify which Doctor this is. I'm still imagining David Tennant, but I have no way to be sure at this point. In fact, now that I think of it, there's been an almost complete absence of physical description of the characters. What do Emily and Sam look like? What about Clara? I think you could go back and add in some descriptions of your characters.

Something in the Doctor's brain clicked. Like a piece of a puzzle just got in place.

Emily stood there. Staring at the angel.

But the memory was too fuzzy, it almost felt like a dream.

That was awesome.

Hey there! I'm here to review for you again. Thanks for tagging me!

Plot
So far, you seem to pretty much be throwing everything in here. So far, we've got Weeping Angels, Daleks, a fob watch, and probably some other stuff I'm forgetting. Which is great and all - throwing stuff together can make for really awesome stories, but I'd like to start getting a sense of the main plot soon.

Logistical Things
1. Why would the Doctor not know what he was searching for? Regeneration trauma? If so, you may want to have him mention that.

2. I'm confused about the Weeping Angel. Was it real or not? And if it isn't real, why would they bother sticking a mirror in front of it? Plus, anything that takes the form of a Weeping Angel becomes a Weeping Angel, so wouldn't it become a Weeping Angel anyway? (Sorry if that doesn't make any sense.)

“If this mirror is ever removed, it’s going to follow you. And that’s really creepy."

There’s only one reason anyone would have to make a fake Weeping Angel, and that’s to create a diversion, he thought. And that’s to create a diversion.

he could feel his two hearts pounding harder than they ever had before.

O_O. I may not know that much about Doctor Who, but I'm verrrrrrrry sure that a Dalek eyestalk growing out of Clara's head is /not/ good.

...yeah, this story is awesome. I won't deny it. XD

Nicely done, ThePhoenix! I definitely found this to be an amusing, and exceptional, chapter. The Doctor makes me crack up, to be honest; he always seems to add a unique, and sometimes spontaneous and sudden, element to every conversation. In particular, I like it when he took the pillow and jumped on the bed, and when he talked about the Weeping Angel being, mostly, harmless, but it will still follow Emily and just act plain creepy, and when Emily found that he was reading through her journals. That last part made me laugh. XD In all, he's an energetic, and definitely likable, character, and I love how well you conveyed and developed his personality in the course of the chapter. Furthermore, the same goes for your other characters. In conclusion, your character development is absolutely wonderful, and I got to learn about each of the characters through your vivid descriptions of them, their actions, and they way that they converse with each other. Emily is decent, The Doctor is funny, Clara's plain mysterious, and Sam's a nice comic relief. Therefore, I must commend you for your character development!

Furthermore, I enjoy the sense of mystery that you develop in this chapter. From the start, you direct the reader into this wonderful story with a sense of suspense and curiosity. The Doctor is looking for something, something that he can't, in particular, identify, as hard as he might try. A short distance away, Emily recognizes, to an extent, the Weeping Angel in front of her. She remembers the TARDIS as well as the angel, which leaves me curious as to what kinds of experiences she had had in the past with the Doctor, and made me interested in reading more and learning a little bit more about the backstory (and that's always a good thing to instill upon your reader in a chapter, so I praise you for that too). When Clara and Sam vanish near the end of the story, I was disturbed. Sam's not the kind of person that I would imagine to shut up, if I would put it so bluntly, that easily, and I can't imagine that Clara would either. As such, their silence was a nice element of suspense that you incorporated into the story, so, once more, good job. Finally, when the Doctor and Emily finds Clara standing alone in the room, I knew that something had to be wrong. My suspense and intrigue increased, as well as my preparations for the shock that I knew was about to come. The story began with a sense of mystery, and it ended with a bang, which I enjoyed immensely. Therefore, I can truly say that, when it comes to the plot of this chapter, I'm impressed. I love the sense of mystery you developed, the flow of your plot, and the way that this story is written so skillfully and thoughtfully.

In conclusion, this was an exceptional chapter. I enjoyed reading it from start to finish, and I thought it was a lot of fun. Your characters are wonderfully developed and conveyed, as is the plotline of the story and the setting. This story has an air of mystery that captivates and intrigues me, and leaves me eager to learn more. It is vivid, it is bright, and I found practically no errors in spelling/grammar throughout this story. Thanks for this wonderful chapter, ThePhoenix, and I'd love to be tagged the next time you post a chapter, okay? Thanks, and well done!