-
Re: Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 7
Hello there! I'm here to give this a review on this lovely Review Day. My apologies for not having read the previous parts of this chapter. Overall, this seems like ...
Sun Sep 25, 2016 6:12 am -
Re: Me and My Imagination: Chapter 5, I'm A Good Person
Hey there! I was looking for something to review and I found this and thought it was interesting. Apologies for not having read previous chapters, but I hope this will ...
Sun Sep 25, 2016 5:11 am -
Re: Ousland Uprising Chapter 2
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this lovely Review Day. Overall, this is a pretty good start. I liked the interactions between your characters, especially between Vosper ...
Sun Sep 25, 2016 12:23 am -
Re: Chapter 1.3 (Unknown Title)
Hey there! Thought I'd drop by for a quick review on this lovely Review Day. Overall, this is a fairly solid, if short chapter. I like how Alex is so ...
Sun Sep 25, 2016 12:03 am -
Re: Among Dying Stars (Part 2)
Hey there Wizard! I saw this hadn't gotten much love, so I thought I'd drop by and review it today. Overall, this is pretty good. You have a very interesting ...
Sat Sep 24, 2016 11:50 am -
Re: The struggle of a loving mother.
Hey there. I thought I'd give you some of my thoughts on this today. The purpose of this piece was unclear to me. It honestly seems like just a philosophical ...
Sat Sep 24, 2016 10:14 am -
Re: Ungrateful (Edited)
Hey there! I thought I'd go ahead and give this a quick review today. Overall, I think this is very well done. I like the touch about the guttural versus ...
Fri Sep 23, 2016 12:51 pm -
Re: The Cave - Chapter VIII - Spatulas and Cool Chairs
Hey Julias! I saw this hasn't gotten much love, so I thought I'd go ahead and give it a review. Please disregard any stupid things I say because I don't ...
Thu Sep 22, 2016 9:17 am -
Re: The Shadow Crown (CHAPTER 2)
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by and review this for RevMo today. :) This is a pretty solid chapter, if a little longer than you'd generally see on YWS. ...
Wed Sep 21, 2016 12:00 pm -
Re: Chapter4 (BÖÐÚLFUR’S P.O.V)
Hey there. Sorry, haven't read previous parts, so I'm just going to go from what I see here. The first part, with them escaping, honestly felt kind of rushed to ...
Tue Sep 20, 2016 8:34 am -
Re: Chapter four/ story from the past: Kid with the medal hands- Beast Vs. Boss
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by and give this a review, seeing as it's been sitting for so long in the Green Room. Two things I'm going to get ...
Mon Sep 19, 2016 10:44 am -
Re: To the ruler in Kashmir
Hey there! I thought I'd go ahead and review this for you today. I completely agree with what the previous review said about paragraphs - this would be a lot ...
Mon Sep 19, 2016 4:57 am -
Re: Gregor and the Bloodbath of Regalia: Chapter 2
Hey there! I really liked Gregor the Overlander when I read it, so I thought I'd come and give this a review today. (Also, I haven't read the series in ...
Sun Sep 18, 2016 12:41 pm -
Re: Pseyechia; Chapter 1.1: A News Story (Edited)
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by and give this a quick review today. You have an interesting idea here. I really like novels that take the idea that a ...
Sun Sep 18, 2016 12:35 pm -
Re: Whomerlock Chapter 10
Hi Dracula! Back again as always - I just really love this fanfic. And I really enjoyed this part. Overall, it was a very smooth read. Your weakest scene was ...
Sat Sep 17, 2016 11:48 am