Children are said to be the most valuable gift from God.
God in his generosity chose to bless some people with children, some with money and many more.
Those he chose to bless with children are automatically obliged to take proper care of the gifts given them for someday, they will be held responsible for the way they bring them up.
Parents especially mothers have that immense love for their children. They are said to be weaker vessels but when it comes to the love they have have for their children, it sometimes goes beyond the critical thinking of mankind.
Children are expected to live a life of obedience, respect for one another, and many more. But sometimes instead of them applying these values in building up their lives, they rather do the opposite.
Bringing them to a place where the entire community tends to give up on them.
These children end up being prostitutes, armed robbers and they sometimes become even mad in the process.
These children are sometimes referred to as the social cast out. Even as the whole wide world has given up on these children parents, most especially mothers try to do everything possible to bring their children out of that mud.
Father's on the other hand also try to get their children out of such horrible situation.
Sometimes it gets to certain points where the fathers tend to lose the hope of recovering their home. Upon several thinking and reasoning, they sometimes seem to see no way of solving their problems.
They sometimes try to find something to comfort and relieve them of the pain and sorrow they go through.
Some tend to seek help from the old miserable doctor, Mr. Alcohol.
Some fathers tend to rely solely on this old doctor to relief them of the pains and sorrows they are going through but what this doctor does is to inject the biotics of laziness, neglect of responsibility and totally leaves them as vulnerable as a three month baby.
Instead of these fathers to assist their spouses in dealing with their problems, they rather add up to the work load the mothers are carrying. Thereby leaving the burdens on the mothers alone.
Mothers are said to be loving and caring when it comes to their children. They sometimes have to sell all their personal belongings for the hope of recovering their home.
Some mothers go to the extent of denying themselves food just to save the little money they have into redeeming their family.
Some fathers instead of saving the little money they have, in order to save their family, they go to the drinking spots and bars for some tots of alcohol.
They think drinking will console them from the pain and suffering they are going through. While mothers are suffering just to make ends meet, fathers, if not all, after visiting their usual medical specialist, they sleep to the extent that they even forget to visit the wash room and as a result, they ease on themselves like three month old babies.
A mother is always ready and prepared to do the impossible just to save her children.
Eeii, could you believe that some mothers even sacrifice parts of their bodies for their children. What can I say then? Hmm, the love of a mother is much deeper than the depths of the sea.
I say with all boldness and confidence that, there is no logical explanation of a mother's love for her children.
Isn't it wonderful how a mother can do all these things for her children? Hmm, to whom at all will I give the credit?
Should the credit be given to the mothers for loving and caring for their children? Or should it be given to God for placing in them such a wonderful thing called love?
This question is for you and you to answer. I hope to get the answer someday.
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Hey there. I thought I'd give you some of my thoughts on this today.
The purpose of this piece was unclear to me. It honestly seems like just a philosophical ramble about parenthood, and it doesn't seem to have a central idea. It makes for honestly confusing reading.
This is a bold assertion, and it needs to be backed up and explained significantly more than it is now. What values, exactly, are they not applying, and how does that lead the entire community to give up on them? What about people who turn to prostitution so they don't starve, through no fault of their own other than bad luck? Yes, mothers do a lot to keep their children out of such situations, but I don't really understand why you need this point here in the first place. It's an overly broad statement with implications I don't think you were intending.
I disagree with this. Science, for one, does a lot to explain the power of familial ties. It has a lot to do with hormones and chemicals, though I'll admit I don't know the details. But it's simple evolution - if the mother doesn't care about the child, she'd leave it to die and the species wouldn't continue. If you're looking for a spiritual explanation, well, having a child and loving that child can do a lot to change people for the better - it gives them the opportunity to serve someone else and generally grow as a person. Plus, again, babies wouldn't survive otherwise. Seems like a pretty good reason for God to make that bond. I agree that a mother's love can be astonishing and wonderful, but I don't think it's illogical.
I'm assuming this is the central question of the piece, and personally I find the answer quite easy. Assuming you mean the credit for how the children turn out, the credit should be given to the parents. After all, they raised the child. But the thanks for the opportunity to have the child would, of course, be given to God.
That's pretty much all I've got. I don't know what your intention for this piece was, but I'd recommend picking one central point to argue/inform about, and then expanding upon it with specific pieces of evidence and more explanation. Good luck, and keep writing!
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Your writing was fair enough but i believe that both the parent are individually responsible for child as family doesn't involve only mother and children but also a father. Yeah it's true that the mother has always played a crucial role in our lives. A girl needs a mother more than a father. I was reading a book on gender studies and the book was all saying about the issues mostly married women face in their lives. Moreover, it has been said that the girls get more matured than boys and can deal with stress quite easily. It's quite unusual and amusing to see that a woman can play several roles in her life. She manages her jobs, takes care of her family and so on. Being a girl I'm proud of it and looking forward for some fun adventures in life.
I love the way you have emphasized mother's love but I guess father's love is also equally important. I know some men end up doing wrong and illegal stuffs but we cannot generalize and blame the whole men community for ending up like so. In my opinion i guess that you must also emphasize the love of father along with mother.
But overall it's a good one and i enjoyed reading it. keep it up and keep writing more. I guess both god and parents should equally be thanked for such a wonderful gift of life and love.
Thanks..... Your comment is well noted