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Re: Keeping It Together
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review today. Also, this is the second script I have reviewed today, which is a rare occurrence on here. First ...
Sun Oct 29, 2017 9:44 am -
Re: The Infected Chapter 2 - The Curing
Well that was unexpected. Matt looked up into the stars wondering about the meaning of life, no one knew it but it would be nice to know. Okay, so this ...
Sun Oct 29, 2017 9:17 am -
Re: The Infected Chapter 1.2 - Saving Matt
Hey there! I'm back for the next review. I'd be curious to know why you decided to not use that last chapter, because if I'm honest I thought it made ...
Sun Oct 29, 2017 8:30 am -
Re: The Infected Unused Chapter - The Infection Begins
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review on this fine Review Day. I noticed this is an unused chapter, so I'll read this one first and ...
Sun Oct 29, 2017 8:01 am -
Re: Penitence (A Guardian Angel Story)
Hey there Silloria! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review on this Review Day. Well, that was dark. These angels aren't very angelic. Something that I liked throughout ...
Sun Oct 29, 2017 8:00 am -
Re: Excerpt 1- Hicksville, NY
Hey there, kp, and welcome to the site! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review today. First off, I can really relate to the feelings you express here ...
Sun Oct 29, 2017 5:49 am -
Re: Scene 2: Debriefing
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review this lovely Review Day. First off, a script! Cool! I don't get to see very many of those on ...
Sun Oct 29, 2017 5:18 am -
Re: Adryan's Promise - Chapter 1.2 (The River)
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a review this lovely Review Day! The magic and spiritual connection stuff was really interesting, but I'll admit I'm still confused as ...
Sun Oct 29, 2017 4:38 am -
Re: The Truth Holders Prologue (Draft 1)
I'm here to help rescue your chapter from the clutches of that almighty beast, The Green Room! *commence dramatic music* Frane was walking through the woods and counting his money, ...
Thu Oct 26, 2017 12:01 pm -
Re: Chapter 9.2: Ilami
And back again. Sorry if these reviews are a little more incoherent than normal - I'm using a voice recognition thing to type this since my wrists hurt. Okay, I'm ...
Mon Oct 23, 2017 8:03 am -
Re: Chapter 9.1: Ilami
Okay, let's do this. Jaxin! I'd missed him. I really like him, actually, and he made me smile a lot in this chapter. Wait. Did I just think I would ...
Mon Oct 23, 2017 7:40 am -
Re: Chapter 8.2: Gael
Hey Light! Here for a review as always. :D Wow, we get a lot of new information hinted at in this chapter. The biggest thing is, of course, that Gael ...
Sat Oct 14, 2017 6:59 am -
Re: Overwhelmed
Here for the review I promised.
Sat Sep 30, 2017 9:01 am -
Re: Burn
Hello, AliceinBlue! I saw this one last work in the Green Room and thought I'd clear it for the millionth time in the past week. I haven't reviewed poetry in ...
Fri Sep 29, 2017 8:32 am -
Re: Moments Of Life
Hey there! After reading your other work, I thought I'd come review this too! If I'm really honest, I'll have to say I didn't think this one worked as well ...
Fri Sep 29, 2017 8:13 am
