MeAndMyThoughts

Thanks. I will correct the grammatical errors. I too thought that the last line was longer than it should be. Rather than beat I try more to keep the poem ...

Okay. Great work.

Thanks for telling. I will correct it right away.

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Thanks for telling.

I have changed a few things. Is it better now?

Sorry to confuse you there. Simply put this line doesn't seem right %u2014 'In just one drop, you know that nobody can see.' Maybe there is some other meaning which ...

Thanks! I am not disappointed by criticism, except when people say I am force rhyming (on my rhyming poems). I welcome other form of criticism. Actually I wrote 'lies' like ...

Thanks for the suggestions. But grammatically 'or' is correct. Yeah, I know the poem has a weak start. I initially thought of making it a funny poem but then added ...

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Thanks so much!

Hey there. I hope to give a fair review. Overall a really good poem. The way you have given the time is the best part. Just that in the first ...

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Of course. If I am unable to do a review myself, please send me a private message. I hope I can be of help.

Thanks. But I didn't get that line between *...*. I just believe that Life is complicated and complex. Not the same pieces fit in everyone's life. Hope you enjoyed it.