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Hey Raff! I'm here to review another work! First Impressions So I enjoyed this story, spooky, good descriptions, well written, original, not overdone. Both from this and the last story ...

Hey Raf99! Here to review your piece! I found it very charming, definitely a well-written stream of consciousness work. You use 1st person in the way that I think it ...

Hey RatHat! Welcome to the site! We're glad to have you here. Let me jump into your review. First Impression The story is well written and flows naturally. I enjoy ...

Well, happy birthday! Here with a little review! First Impressions The rhyme scheme is nice, and the poem has a whimsicalness to it that's fun, and communicates a childishness that ...

Wow, very raw. Well, welcome to the site. Well, I'll jump right in. Y'know, I don't normally like crazy emotion fests - I often think they can be an inexperienced ...

Hey Roohas, welcome to YWS. It's a great community if you are willing to participate. I'm excited to review your work! First Impressions Your pacing was well done; I definitely ...

Hey Canopy, I hope you are well. I never will claim to be an expert on poetry, but I have an ever-growing love of the craft, so I will give ...

Hey BluePanthers 512! You are my first review in two years, so I hope I'm not too rusty. I am happy to be reviewing your short story first, it is ...

Hey, Andrew here with a quick review! I saw this in the greenroom and thought I'd check it out. I haven't read the full story, though I did pop back ...

Andrew here with a quick review! I enjoyed the flashback, though I did feel the dialogue was a bit clunky at points. The look at Sigvald was my favorite part. ...

Andrew back, after long last. I missed Ethan, and I'm excited to get back to hearing about his story. NGL, navigating the order of these chapters is really difficult for ...

Hey Alliyah! It's been years since I've reviewed poetry, so I might be a bit rusty, but I'll give it a go. I clicked on this and, honestly, was quite ...

1. Having met Max to be a ruthless businessman before, do his actions here show a soft spot he may have for Ethan even if it may have backfired in ...

Andrew here for a Harsh Review ! I always have to put this disclaimer on harsh reviews of poetry. I'm like really suck at poetry. I can't write it, and ...

Hey Andrew here with a speedy review! I read this, and decided to leave it to someone more skilled, but nobody came along, so I came back XD. Since I'm ...