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Re: Exploding Office
Hey Raf99! Here to review your piece! I found it very charming, definitely a well-written stream of consciousness work. You use 1st person in the way that I think it ...
Sep 9, 2025 -
Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 1
Hey RatHat! Welcome to the site! We're glad to have you here. Let me jump into your review. First Impression The story is well written and flows naturally. I enjoy ...
Sep 3, 2025 -
Re: An Ode to Myself [Turning 18]
Well, happy birthday! Here with a little review! First Impressions The rhyme scheme is nice, and the poem has a whimsicalness to it that's fun, and communicates a childishness that ...
Aug 30, 2025 -
Re: The car didn't stop (a true story)
Wow, very raw. Well, welcome to the site. Well, I'll jump right in. Y'know, I don't normally like crazy emotion fests - I often think they can be an inexperienced ...
Aug 28, 2025 -
Re: The dragon Sword
Hey Roohas, welcome to YWS. It's a great community if you are willing to participate. I'm excited to review your work! First Impressions Your pacing was well done; I definitely ...
Aug 12, 2025 -
Re: ceiling fan
Hey Canopy, I hope you are well. I never will claim to be an expert on poetry, but I have an ever-growing love of the craft, so I will give ...
Jul 30, 2025 -
Re: monsters once known.
Hey BluePanthers 512! You are my first review in two years, so I hope I'm not too rusty. I am happy to be reviewing your short story first, it is ...
Jul 30, 2025 -
Re: The Last Spell 19.2
Hey, Andrew here with a quick review! I saw this in the greenroom and thought I'd check it out. I haven't read the full story, though I did pop back ...
May 26, 2023 -
Re: The Lie that Saved the World Chapter 6: Day off
Andrew here with a quick review! I enjoyed the flashback, though I did feel the dialogue was a bit clunky at points. The look at Sigvald was my favorite part. ...
May 25, 2023 -
Re: The Lie that Saved the World Chapter 5: Induction part 2
Andrew back, after long last. I missed Ethan, and I'm excited to get back to hearing about his story. NGL, navigating the order of these chapters is really difficult for ...
May 17, 2023 -
Re: what, if anything, is essential to being human? [a definition]
Hey Alliyah! It's been years since I've reviewed poetry, so I might be a bit rusty, but I'll give it a go. I clicked on this and, honestly, was quite ...
May 2, 2023 -
Re: The Lie that Saved the World: Chapter 0, part 5
1. Having met Max to be a ruthless businessman before, do his actions here show a soft spot he may have for Ethan even if it may have backfired in ...
Sep 29, 2022 -
Re: Roaring Flames, Heathen Night
Andrew here for a Harsh Review ! I always have to put this disclaimer on harsh reviews of poetry. I'm like really suck at poetry. I can't write it, and ...
Sep 28, 2022 -
Re: Two Rondeaus
Hey Andrew here with a speedy review! I read this, and decided to leave it to someone more skilled, but nobody came along, so I came back XD. Since I'm ...
Sep 25, 2022 -
Re: The Lie that Saved the World: Chapter 0, part 4
Andrew here with a super fast review! Every chapter I enjoy this story more, sorry that I'm so behind, but I hope to catch up soon. Lets get into it! ...
Sep 23, 2022