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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Last Spell 19.2

    Hey, Andrew here with a quick review! I saw this in the greenroom and thought I'd check it out. I haven't read the full story, though I did pop back ...

    May 26, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    Re: The Lie that Saved the World Chapter 6: Day off

    Andrew here with a quick review! I enjoyed the flashback, though I did feel the dialogue was a bit clunky at points. The look at Sigvald was my favorite part. ...

    May 25, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
    Re: The Lie that Saved the World Chapter 5: Induction part 2

    Andrew back, after long last. I missed Ethan, and I'm excited to get back to hearing about his story. NGL, navigating the order of these chapters is really difficult for ...

    May 17, 2023


  • Hey Alliyah! It's been years since I've reviewed poetry, so I might be a bit rusty, but I'll give it a go. I clicked on this and, honestly, was quite ...

    May 2, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
    Re: The Lie that Saved the World: Chapter 0, part 5

    1. Having met Max to be a ruthless businessman before, do his actions here show a soft spot he may have for Ethan even if it may have backfired in ...

    Sep 29, 2022

  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic
    Re: Roaring Flames, Heathen Night

    Andrew here for a Harsh Review ! I always have to put this disclaimer on harsh reviews of poetry. I'm like really suck at poetry. I can't write it, and ...

    Sep 28, 2022

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Two Rondeaus

    Hey Andrew here with a speedy review! I read this, and decided to leave it to someone more skilled, but nobody came along, so I came back XD. Since I'm ...

    Sep 24, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    Re: The Lie that Saved the World: Chapter 0, part 4

    Andrew here with a super fast review! Every chapter I enjoy this story more, sorry that I'm so behind, but I hope to catch up soon. Lets get into it! ...

    Sep 23, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
    Re: The Lie that Saved the World: Chapter 0, part 3

    1. Does the political aspect of this chapter convey how close South Africa is to a dictatorship despite claiming to be a democracy? The poltical aspects are defiantly interesting. Its ...

    Sep 20, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: The Halls of St. Julian's - Eduard 1.1

    Andrew here with a review! Saw this in the green room and thought I'd give it a read - and I'm glad I did. It's amazing! Very well written, clean ...

    Sep 9, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
    Re: The Lie that Saved the World: Chapter 0, part 2

    Andrew here, sorry for the delay. I would say I'm busy, but I'm always busy - though I do hope to be a little more on top of reviewing over ...

    Sep 8, 2022

  • Other » General, General
    Re: [DELETED]​

    I'd just like to say, this piece brought me to tears. The exploration of mortality, impernance, and ends really blew me away. This poem, among its many facets, is obviously ...

    Aug 31, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural
    Re: Darkest Faewilde Ch.1

    Hey Gem! Andrew here with a fast review! I always meant to review finders, but never got around to it, so I was happy to see this in the green ...

    Aug 24, 2022

  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: all the baggage tags i didn't throw away

    First impressions This was a fun poem! It uses the interesting setting of packing to capture a variety of emotions -none of which are super positive though. XD My favourite ...

    Aug 22, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
    Re: The Lie that Saved the World: Chapter 0, part 1

    Andrew here for another review! I'm not one hundred percent sure where this happens conrogically, but tbh it might be my favorite chapter so far. You're definitely improving! But into ...

    Jul 22, 2022


All truly wise thoughts have been thought already thousands of times; but to make them truly ours, we must think them over again honestly, till they take root in our personal experience.
— Johann Wolfgang von Goethe