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Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
Re: The Lie that Saved the World: Chapter 0, part 5
1. Having met Max to be a ruthless businessman before, do his actions here show a soft spot he may have for Ethan even if it may have backfired in ...
Sep 29, 2022
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Andrew here for a Harsh Review ! I always have to put this disclaimer on harsh reviews of poetry. I'm like really suck at poetry. I can't write it, and ...
Sep 28, 2022
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Hey Andrew here with a speedy review! I read this, and decided to leave it to someone more skilled, but nobody came along, so I came back XD. Since I'm ...
Sep 24, 2022
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Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
Re: The Lie that Saved the World: Chapter 0, part 4
Andrew here with a super fast review! Every chapter I enjoy this story more, sorry that I'm so behind, but I hope to catch up soon. Lets get into it! ...
Sep 23, 2022
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Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
Re: The Lie that Saved the World: Chapter 0, part 3
1. Does the political aspect of this chapter convey how close South Africa is to a dictatorship despite claiming to be a democracy? The poltical aspects are defiantly interesting. Its ...
Sep 20, 2022
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Andrew here with a review! Saw this in the green room and thought I'd give it a read - and I'm glad I did. It's amazing! Very well written, clean ...
Sep 9, 2022
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Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
Re: The Lie that Saved the World: Chapter 0, part 2
Andrew here, sorry for the delay. I would say I'm busy, but I'm always busy - though I do hope to be a little more on top of reviewing over ...
Sep 8, 2022
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I'd just like to say, this piece brought me to tears. The exploration of mortality, impernance, and ends really blew me away. This poem, among its many facets, is obviously ...
Aug 31, 2022
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Hey Gem! Andrew here with a fast review! I always meant to review finders, but never got around to it, so I was happy to see this in the green ...
Aug 24, 2022
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First impressions This was a fun poem! It uses the interesting setting of packing to capture a variety of emotions -none of which are super positive though. XD My favourite ...
Aug 22, 2022
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Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
Re: The Lie that Saved the World: Chapter 0, part 1
Andrew here for another review! I'm not one hundred percent sure where this happens conrogically, but tbh it might be my favorite chapter so far. You're definitely improving! But into ...
Jul 22, 2022
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Hey Andrew, here! It's been a bit! so sorry, I've been crazy busy all summer, but I hope to be reviewing more of your pieces of the next couple of ...
Jul 20, 2022
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Aaaandrew here with a review! I don't normally review poetry, but the religious themes in this one caught me! First impressions: As a religious person, the use of religious phrases ...
Jul 12, 2022
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Baaack again for a very late review! I am sad to see this is the last of this story I can review on the site, because I have been enjoying ...
Jul 12, 2022
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Andrew here with a very very very very late review! So sorry about that, my life got a bit outa of control! (or more accurately, very in control, I have ...
Jun 28, 2022