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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Taxonomy

    Hey, aooborromeo! Here's a review for you today! Seeking to grab our own (like) anacondas and their prey. Judgements are held captive there, like killers in straight jackets. I really ...

    Jun 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Remember Me

    Hey, Em16! Here's a review for you today! As the lightning lit up all the ways we were a disaster I really liked the imagery in this quote. I imagined ...

    Jun 11, 2021
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: Warm Saturday Mornings

    Hi CaptainJack! Here's a quick review for you today! with strong black coffee and the overall absence of creamer and sugar as the coffee was made by hardy men of ...

    Jun 10, 2021
  • Art » Fantasy, General Re: Whimsical Wisps

    Hi Poetry Misfit! Here's a review for you today! When I sleep, my head is like the sky and my dreams are the colors displayed across it. I love your ...

    Jun 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: [un]familiar

    Hi chikara! Here's a review for you today! this is not the first time someone has been here. this is not the last. Footprints can be both familiar and unfamiliar, ...

    Jun 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Horror, Lyrical Re: The nature's feelings and tragedy

    Hey ForeverYoung299! Here's a review for you today! Trying to guard Itself from the hard Strokes of the rain Which seems to give them strain. I love your imagery throughout ...

    Jun 7, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Why do we love a place?

    Hi Mingan! Here's a short review for you today! Do we love a place for the people? The ones who give us strength Who brighten our day A place where ...

    Jun 6, 2021
  • Art » Lyrical, General Re: New Me

    Hi SadGuy! Here's a review for you! I really liked your rap lyrics! There was a very nice flow and I loved your word choice;) Dig my grave i’m on ...

    Jun 5, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: overexposure at its finest

    Hey chikara! Here's a review for you! I really enjoyed this poem. It has good rhythm and very good imagery! it's black and white, a still image of a woman ...

    Jun 3, 2021
  • Script » Dramatic, Realistic Re: An Utterly Stupid, Nonsensical, and Ultimately Fruitless Exercise to Practice my Suspenseful Writing

    Hi Kazumi! Here's a review for you today! I’ll approach him, then… seduce him. Well then... off to a great start lol. I honestly laughed when I read that and ...

    Jun 3, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Mountain (6)

    Hi zekcede! Here's a review for you! I think this project is actually pretty interesting. I've never thought of taking a poem line by line and then writing the end ...

    Jun 3, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Mountain (5)

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    Oops, I accidentally pasted the review into the wrong part. Silly me. Go to number 6 to see my review! Sorry... I love your poems!

    Jun 3, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Overflow - Chapter 2.3

    Hi Geo! I have a review for you to get your work out of the green room! After reading all the parts up to this one, I have to say ...

    Jun 3, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Realistic Re: True Freedom: Prologue

    Hey Hannah! I have a review for you! This is a very vividly described prologue. I really liked all the descriptions of the surroundings. Nice job! In Central Oregon; far ...

    Jun 1, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: To feed the soul of the Poet-Angler

    Hi Liminality! Here's a review to save you from the green room! I need a hook, a reason to fish for your time and attention. I really liked these lines ...

    Jun 1, 2021


Life is like an onion. You peel it off one layer at a time, and sometimes you weep.
— Carl Sandburg