MaryJaneStallheizer

Wow, is all I can say, I love it. It is short, but with so much meaning, and I can't tell you how many times I have felt in this ...

This is such a soothing poem and it really puts me in a relaxation mood. It's short and sweet. I can really picture the images and the scents mentioned in ...

Wow, this was quite impressive. Even though it was short, I had to read it a couple times to get it in my head. It was very beautiful and had ...

This is such a touching poem! I have had an experience like this and i understand the pain that goes through. Its such a terrible feeling, but you have transformed ...

I thought this was a good start! I could feel the yearning in this song. It really did reach out to you. Keep on writing!

Wow this is just a stunning piece of work. I was in love with every part of this short story. Words can't describe how beautiful and elegant this is. Never ...

I really liked this poem! It is very emotional and touching. It sort of reminds me of the poems I write. I hope you keep on writing, and I look ...

Very touching poem! This truly was a terrible tragedy what happened to the little girl. This poem had a nice flow and it was very emotional. Keep up the great ...

This was hauntingly brilliant. I had goosebumps the whole time reading this. It really gave me a shiver through my spine. I hope you continue to write more poems with ...

This is a really good poem. I'm inferring this poem is talking about racism, and this is not an easy topic to write about. However you made it sound really ...

Pretty good! My favorite part of this poem was A false impression of kindness and joy, She is a traitor disguised as a friend This spoke to me as a ...

I loved this poem! The gentleness and simplicity in this poem just makes it beautiful

Deep touching poem, this poem relates to me in many ways, awesome job!