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AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! My heart! My poor bleeding heart! You killed off Bailey! I AM CRYING ACTUAL TEARS RIGHT NOW! MAKE SURE MELLISSSA AND TOBY GET TOGETHER AND JEAN LUC GETS A ...

Hello. Well. This was really interesting. I must apologise but if I must be honest, it's feels like it's going a bit too fast and the chapter was rather short. ...

Hi! I just read this chapter and I found only one issue. I don't normally point things out like this but I have recently discovered that some things must be ...

Thhis is getting really good but you are moving the storyline along too fast. Don't worry, I have that issue as well. But that's not what I'm trying to say. ...

This is quite good. I can tell instantly that this story is about the discovery of a young girls true identity. I have to say, there are a few stories ...

Wow, is all I can say. This is the first Teen Titans Fan Fic I have ever read and I believe it is amazing. Well done. Though I have one ...

This chapter is very unclear and confusing. I don't think that you thought this through well enough. I beilieve that it needs more detail and better discriptions about Sam and ...

That was great but you need to put a bit more effort into it. Try actual speach marks such as " or '. Ok. But all in all a good ...

That was extreamly short so I can't say much but it was rather good. I belive that you should make your short stories a bit longer otherwise there would be ...

That was...There are no words to describe how sad that is. This is the saddest poem that I have ever read and it came close to making me cry. The ...

I have to say that that was extremly sad. I think that you are very talented. I was suprised when you said that it was your first poem so I ...

That was very interesting. I believe that you could add two things, those are the descriptions for the young girl and the serpent. You have done very well in writing ...

That was brilliant! A magnificant ending! I love the part where the say that the amulets are the only things keeping them alive. It is full of action, has an ...

That is very interesting. I love the part where she calls out "LOVE" as if it were the most normal thing in the world. I believe that you can go ...

OMG! THAT WAS SO COOL! HA! Jabberwocky? Oh! I REMEMBER NOW! *mental face palm* LOL! Grostuqe is not the best word the for the awsome madd hatter! HE'S MAD FOR ...