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Re: Rose
Oho! My good Whovian friend! This is Margo here for a review. Being a fan of the Doctor, I relished in this poem. I'm always so skeptical of fan inspired ...
Jul 27, 2015 -
Re: Paralyzed
Oh, the desire! Wonderfully expressed, Annaclare! Love certainly is a disorienting feeling. And my did you ever capture that. The world keeps spinning. The time keeps ticking. And our love ...
Jul 19, 2015 -
Re: . . .
Margo here for a review. I'm totally lost, Prokaryote. I just don't understand this at all. Your too deep for my shallow mind. Curtains. Anorexic. A gas station. What?! One ...
Jul 17, 2015 -
Re: Dear Me
Margo here for a review. Lots of emotion depicted in this letter. Writing is a good way to express yourself, especially when you've got negative thoughts you need to get ...
Jul 16, 2015 -
Re: Blood on Snow.
Hello Chrissy who is pickled. Are you embalmed? Regardless, this is Margo here for a review. At first glance this seems to be an erotic piece...but after reading to the ...
Jul 14, 2015 -
Re: The Meltdown
Hey, UriahElroy. This is Margo Seuss coming at you with a review. Excellent diction. Your descriptors allowed me to vividly imagine your chaotic world. Your story was exciting, but ended ...
Jul 10, 2015 -
Re: The Statues Are Weeping
Hey, there! Margo here for a review. I like your use of alliteration in this piece. 'Donated to drying gullets,' sounds pretty rad! Are the statues weeping for a reason? ...
Jul 8, 2015 -
Re: Spaaaaaaaace
My friend. This poem would be great if your other stanzas were as good as the first two and last three lines of the first and last stanza. To me ...
Jul 6, 2015 -
Re: Our Night In May
Hey, Plathonstone. Margo here for a review. Poetry and grammar have never really made a whole lot of sense to me either. My recommendation would be to look at a ...
Jul 6, 2015 -
Re: The story of Carrie Moretz
Cute chapter. Every story is worth finishing, my friend! I have some suggestions for you in your writing journey. Let's take a look at your first paragraph. I don't know ...
Jul 6, 2015 -
Re: we could not
Beautifully written. A tragic message of losing oneself. Dying before being dead. The flow was brilliant,you word choice was enchanting and haunting at the same time. My only possible suggestion ...
Jul 3, 2015 -
Re: Our Life
Hello, Mialy, Margo here with a review. This poem reminds us of our mortality. It's a real punch of reality...harsh reality. We'll all get old, and we'll all die. This ...
Jul 3, 2015 -
Re: The Modern Schoolroom
Hey there, Hermione. Margo here for a review. I give you props for this idea. The school room environment has certainly changed over the years. Teachers are no where near ...
Jun 6, 2015 -
Re: The Dream Maker : Chapter One
Hey, Ange! Margo Seuss here for a review. Your originality is commendable, my friend. I haven't read something this intriguing in quite some time. Your opening paragraph was the perfect ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: I am Free
Hello, Tay01. This is Margo here for a review. Correct me if I'm wrong, but I believe the message you're trying to get across is: death is a kind of ...
Jan 25, 2015
