MamaLama95

This was.. tragically impressive. In a good way of course. Brilliant work.

Thank you all for the reviews, I really appreciated every comment and criticism. I actually wrote this as an English assignment and did it in about forty minutes, so it's ...

There's no need to apologize - your review was great and it honestly did help. Welcome back, btw, and thanks for taking the time to look at my work. I ...

Thank you very much for the review - I appreciate every word.

Thank you to everyone who reviewed - I can definitely see all my mistakes and it's nice to know that they can be fixed relatively quickly. Especially thanks to Toto, ...

Quite brilliant in fact. Good meter, you've got a grasp on punctuation and grammar, as well as vocabulary. Beautiful theme.

Quite brilliant in fact. Good meter, you've got a grasp on punctuation and grammar, as well as vocabulary. Beautiful theme.

Quite a beautiful poem actually. I like the wording and you do a great job making the metaphor flow very well. Keep working.

I did notice the missing words, but I've already rectified that - I simply didn't want to upload the poem all over again. Thank you for all the comments, every ...

Thank you for all the reviews, I appreciate every comment.

I prefer to let the reader have whatever interpretation they wish to - I think that leaves the poem more unchained and open for anyone to relate to. Thank you ...

Some grammatical errors and punctuation issues, but nothing a proof-read or some editing wouldn't fix. Good idea and presented in an appropriate psychotic manner, if a little underdeveloped.

Refreshing, clear imagery and nice intertextuality. All in all, quite a decent poem, if lacking a little in a good finish - your last line was good, and powerful, but ...

Brilliant. Think it's a great poem with a wonderful message - well done.

The topic was; Your story is about a maid in a dorm room fixing a hole punch.