MamaLama95

I don't mean to be ungrateful, but I didn't understand your review. You just copy and pasted my work, and half my signature.

Don't worry about the character - I know who they are, I know what they're about, and I know how they live in the world around them, trust me. I ...

Thank you for all the comments. I understand what you mean about the description - I will cut it down slightly, so I have some for later perhaps, but I've ...

Intimate, sweet, loving; this poem was a perfect execution of the power of love. It really was fantastic, and I think you should definitely keep writing this kind of stuff, ...

Dark, deep, and with some beautiful wording. I'd work on the meter/flow of the poem, because I lost it at moments when I was reading, but that's about the only ...

I'm unaware as to the meaning of 'el mar', but this was short, snappy, and quite funny. You brightened my day my friend, good job.

Shoaib, that line means that it's easier still being in love with this person even though they don't love me back and have forgotten about me (so it's painful), rather ...

I think it's a brilliant idea that you executed fairly well. There were some little nitpicks here and there, but the previous comments have covered pretty much all of them, ...

You literally could not have written this at a better time. Well done my friend.

This was entitle 'Tension', and yet I felt no tension. It's too drawn out and there isn't enough clear imagery. While I think you could make it longer and the ...

You have no idea how grateful I am for your review. To be honest, I have never properly been taught or told how to use correct punctuation in dialogue, so ...

I understand what you're saying about the rhyme, and like I've said, I'm already looking into that - I wrote this when I was 11 and I didn't have much ...

This was pretty good - I haven't seen a sonnet around these parts in too long. Very nice, and I think you've done some great work with imagery too, so ...

I did actually really like this, except the last line. I feel it sort of ruined it a little.

I do realize that I made some significant historical errors - I didn't realize these at the time because I didn't have Internet access and to be completely honest, I ...