Maki-Chan

Oh! I've heard of MNT:GAIDEN! Its an awsome fancomic. Tigerfog is such an amazing artist. He's going to be famous. Last I checked LEO! He came back! I frikin screamed ...

wow, this is really good. There are just a few mistakes though. I’d never seen anyone as handsome as he and I knew I would never see anyone as beautiful ...

1st to point out mistakes and re dos, than my opinion. She sat alone in the plan hospital as she waited for her friend to return with the condition of ...

:shock: GASP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm scared. Ryro-son please put this into smaller parts. I wanna review this, but I don't know if I can. To attract other readers and maybe even reviewers, ...

its pretty interesting. But it really makes no sense to me, I suppose. But then again my opinion doesn't really matter to you. So anywho the words were pretty neat ...

GASP! This is very depressing LunaBuna :cry: It just shows what rage and hunger can do to someone. It can even drive a parent to kill thier own child. I ...

d***, this is so kick a**. I LOVED!!!!! it. *Becomes depressed* must work on my poetry. :cry: Please keep offensive language in literary works. Thanks, -Leja

not bad, not bad ^_^ I rather like this. To me bad days are like hell too. I sit in darkness and pierce into my withering shell with my blade ...

time to check ^_^ What an awfull day!She was trying to get over it but her friends wouldn't let her. What an awfull day! She was trying to get over ...

I rather liked this, but before I go into detail I'll check this first. I didn’t look at Dustin; I just looked past him at nothing. I didn’t look at ...

wow, I really liked this ^_^ Pt. 2 perhaps? If you do have a part 2 I'll be really happy. I'd be really happy if you made this into a ...

this is interesting- but it leaved many questions. Why is the cat counting? Why are they by the train. are they waiting for someone? are they lost? Who?are they going ...

This is like the 5th poem I commented that was yours, I think? But anyways this is awsome !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 9/10 I love your poetry- its just so incredible and awsome. ...

GASP!!!! T-This is just wonderful. I read some of your other poetry- but not for a while. Now I'm heading to your profolio and checking out. ^_^ Part of me ...

Claps- :D I rather like this. Can't wait to read more. Now for corrections “Not a go what is it suppost to mean? Lars sighed and walked out of the ...