Maddymayhem

I'm not here to review, only to tell you that I love this poem. The topic is amazing, and the was you describe it is great.

I'm not here to review, only to tell you that I love this poem. The topic is amazing, and the was you describe it is great.

You may not find the topic beautiful, but some people do. It's a REAL thing to write about, not something fake and made up.

*claps*

Thank you (: and it is kind of about an addiction in its own way :p

This story isn't even close to being done, I had to go do homework while writing it! But and I did have those lines italicized, it just didn't show :/

Claire. You have to be nice. It is completely rude for you to post that. Go look in the forums and lean how to review properly.

Thank you! :3

Thank you! I tried it, t sucks but oh well x3

It won't let me change it to go with the first stanza >.

The first line was meant to be part of the first stanza. It must have gotten confused and decided it wanted to be its own special stanza x3 I'll fixthat ...

This was one of the first things I had ever written, so I did try to rhyme everything and all that. I've always thought about going back and changing it, ...

I detest free-verse poetry. I can't read it, let alone write it. And I wanted short and simple for this poem, there really wasn't a need to make it a ...

The concept of this story is great. It's interesting and more than a little compelling. The word choice threw me off a little bit. There were some un-needed, extremely long ...

Thank you (: I really try hard when writing stuff about how I feel. And this isn't even the darked of them. This pales in comparison to some of my ...