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I am part Irish, so yes, I WORSHIP THE POTATOE! But I don't know, is this really about potatoes? Or are they a metaphor, anyway... 'stead of (a) workin out ...

I think there is something wrong with this site! This must be like the thousandth thing i've read about rape, or torture, or molestation or incest... If this was a ...

A Leaf's life and yours... Your life is like a leaf. It starts out so bright and green, hopeful. combine the first two sentences, and replace "so bright and green" ...

This really captures the thing that I find greatest about life, that a Utopia, what everybody thinks they want, is actually a dystopyia, because there is nothing else left to ...

AHHH! CLiffhanger! I haven't read the first 3 chapters, and know nothing of the plot of the story (I think she is some sort of demon hunter or dragon hunter ...

I love the refrain about what a heart has done, and i love the intensity of this poem, I have a few suggestions of course, as I am probably one ...

"I ain't gonna work on Maggie's farm no more No, I aint gonna work on Maggie's farm no more Well, I wake up in the morning Fold my hands and ...

living in California, I'm going to try my hardest to not mention the teacher's unions, but yah, education sucks. I just don't mean educational performance, but the idea in general. ...

I have two, Catch 22 by Joseph Heller (I pronounce it yo-seph, 'cause he's jewish), and Crime and Punishment by Doestoevesky(which I spelt wrong). These two are so important to ...

Cruci-fixation, or Crucifiction? I really liked the piece, and I'll promise a full review if you clean up the title. I like the pun, if it is indeed intended! :)

Well, I checked this out because I live down the road, and I was very impressed. The power with which you describe eating an orange (but I'm sure there is ...

I like the consistency, but it is kind of rigid, maybe add some twists and turns, and maybe seek out some different language, that could definitely make this more impactful ...

I like the word play and the opening line because the expletive really draws me in. I can't even open my mouth without shit coming out. My mind is in ...

Wow, very intense and graphic---no qualifiers here. Isn't it ironic that someone is playing that stupid S&M song by Rhianna in the other room while I am reading this? Anyway--some ...

Very intriguing, stream-of-consciousness is very effective. As they say on this site, "here are some "nit-picks"?" "This is a question most people ask themselves at least once in their lives ...