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I had to like this, even though I didn't like the father at all. Ugh, people like that make me so frustrated! But this seemed really realistic. Good job. Keep ...

All I have to say is very creative. I wondered what a poem with this title could be about, and I wasn't expecting this. Nice tree metaphor, I liked it ...

Oh, Mell, you always know exactly what to do to make me feel like a slacker. :)

And I don't think half-real is confusing. I have the same question about my characters.

Why???? Why can I only hit the like button once???? Great job. :)

No wonder my dog barks at them... Neat-o little story. (No one says neat-o anymore, do they?) I liked it. I just saw a few grammatical errors I thought I'd ...

I feel I'm not going to be able to do a very good review, because I have the beautiful bittersweet feeling every writer wants a reader to get when they're ...

I had my mommy, whom I love dearly, change all that. Thank God for English teachers as parents.

I don't see anything wrong with it except it's mushily romantic, but hey, you gotta write what you gotta write. Smiley face!

Hey, I really liked the description and metaphors in this. You're right, it is short, but I think it gets the point across. Grammatically, She hide in the should be ...

Thanks so much, everyone! You guys make my day! I'll consider what everyone's said. Please, keep commenting!

LOOOOVE IT! Of course, because everyone on this site can relate to it.

Oh, it was incredibly cheesy. It could've been in the romance section at Wal-Mart. :) Generally I agree with all your reviews, and I thank you for them. I also ...

The more that ' s spread That was the only grammar thing I found. Cute analogy. And it rhymes! I love poems that rhyme! Keep writing!

This was really beautiful. Good job. I really, really hope this isn't a true story, but I have the feeling it is. Either way, you captured the emotion perfectly. Keep ...