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wow thats really good keep going

Its really kinda no offense, you said it yourself, emo. i don't mind it being emo. It is a strange form of poetry but its good

dose the smoking and drinking make her a whore or something else? i like it but i agree its like a story in crazy format just like lulu said

ya this was really good, i hate it when friendships die

wow nice i only wish that the last two lines would rhyme better but i realize that they don't have to be perfect so there isn't much for me to ...

cool, i like it

that was pretty good

wow that was really nice. I like the end and i like the reaction of the man.

that sucks about losing that thing. i really enjoyed this chapter, But how is it that EVERY body is mean to her. just to clarify ron and his mom moved ...

chocoholic, i think because hes moving he is going to meet carolina after, but i agree that i liked part one abit more

I can sympathize for Carolina but if some on said hey stupid that probably wouldn't get to me. But i can see where the speech impediment would be hurtful. i ...

I agree with chocoholic, I had no idea what happened at the end. but I really liked it though. that would have to be the awkwardest situation.

That is hilarious. nice I really liked the personification.

This is pretty awsome i like that you took on a perspective that i dont think i have ever read before. and your bottom thing is awsome, i love catcher ...

I think its expressive and thats all you need. i like it but it is short.