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Hey there! From Sarah's POV it seems that she is a woman held in respect and has some powers of her own. At the start the pace of the story ...

Hey there! I find the starting paragraph too long. Also it was placed in quotation marks, and I was half expecting to find a "said". At the back there. I ...

Hey there! I did read the first chapter so I'm here to review the second one! Overall I like this better than the first one. There's the description of the ...

Hi there! First off, after reading the story I think that Sight would be a god title for this. It's to show the irony of the character's blindness too. Now ...

Hey there! I enjoyed this journal entry. It does bring into mind some thoughts that actually go through our heads in class. The usual student grumbling about how tough their ...

Hey there! I'm impressed with this story. It's simple yet carries a message that somehow will stick with the readers for awhile. First off, I like the simplicity of this. ...

Alright, I see that it's divided into chapters so here I am to review! First off I see that this story is divided into the different sections, talking about two ...

Hey there! Now with only two stanzas I shall touch more on the wording than flow and structure. Since they seemed to be of equal lengths. "My dear, though there ...

Hey there Lylas! I like the simplicity of this poem. It doesn't use much flowery words, but the simple words and the way their strung are nice. I like the ...

Hey there Sakura! This seems the sort of teen fiction summed up in a few paragraphs. Two girl friends are super close, but then they become mortal enemies when one ...

Hey there! I have to say I enjoyed the second part of this story more than the first. Given that the second part had more action in it and also ...

Hey there! In the first stanza. Changing "I'd" to "I" itself would probably flow smoother. As talking in the present tense. In the second stanza, there was the "luminance" in ...

Hey there Izzy! Alright first off this story was pretty short and I found a few spelling errors like "single" "fateful" and "Hour". Do spell check your work before submitting, ...

The concept is very interesting here, and I would honestly like to see more from this. I like stories like these. Something like the Hunger Games but much more of ...

Hey there Shino! This story was an interesting read, it's a very country type of tale. Talking about the farm and livestock. I like the relation that all three generations ...