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I didn't see this poem till today and awwwwwwww

Thank you very much! Its always nice to meet other people who think the same way you do

It was very helpful, thank you very much! I do need to stop beginning sentences with 'And'. I didn't mean to feed into a stereotype, though now that I think ...

Thank you! This is so helpful. I think I might go back and add spaces, actually. So thanks!

Thanks! I'm actually terrible at grammar, and this wasn't meant to be deep. Actually, I tried to make it really blatant and forward. The lines are short because my thoughts ...

To create a space between each stanza just enter and put like five spaces in between the stanzas.

Thank you! and yes, it`s supposed to be 'of' in that line.

Thank you! I think I`ll edit this one, it needs some work

Thank you so much! To answer your question, the contrast from the second and third stanzas is supposed to show somewhere you go and something you do when you stay ...

I would make a spelling mistake. Thanks !!!

Just a note, This poem is kinda random. I really published it to get some advice on how to improve it, so...please review!!

Thank you!! That was really helpful. I entirely understand the punctuation thing, because I SUCK at grammatical stuffs. I just put this poem up to get some writing tips and ...

This is a really cute story! However, I do have one suggestion, which isn`t even important , really. But you put a lot of description into how Kailyn cooked the ...