LoyalDay

I love the tone of the poem, it sounds almost vengeful and angry. I like the diction that you use, they were so fitted perfectly and really brought the affects ...

I love the rhyming theme that happens in those poem. It had a nice flow and it really was a joy to read but at first the title wasn't really ...

This poem was very interesting. It was a joy to read and was a good free verse. I love how you compare Joy to Chills, that's very interesting in way ...

This story was well detail and it really drew me in, as I wondered what exactly was going to happen. You created a nice world, that I feel was well ...

First off, you title in great at drawing readers in and it sound really interesting, that the title made the story stand out. As I read on and found out ...

This is an interesting concept but for me, when everyone was getting ready before breakfast wasn't really that interesting. It doesn't seem that important and all the characters seem to ...

I like the first paragraph, it's interesting and really pulls the reader in, as they wonder what exactly is happening but at some times, the sentences sound a bit choppy ...