LovelessSummer

She hides her petty face, I'm confused as to if you meant pretty or was it supposed to be petty ? and covers up the pain. Her straightened curls disguise, ...

Hello, Iceprincess! Not to be repetitive, but this was adorable ! Teddy, I’m sorry, but I don’t think Mummy’s afraid of ghosts, much less people dressing up as ghosts. She’s ...

Hello! Loveless here to review your story. Well, let's get started. "Catherine?" A voice startled her and she whipped around, a little harsher than she intended . " C an ...

Hello again, Al3xx. Loveless here to review this amazing story you have created. As always, corrections in red, suggestions and comments in purple. Well, let's get started. I tried to ...

Hi, Loveless here! I'm going to be review your story today. First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope your time here will be fantastic. Haha, anyway, i'm wasting time. ...

Hello, Austenite! Loveless here to review your story. The things in green are removals. I sat in the small economy seat of the Qantas plane, playing with the model airplane ...

Yay, chapter one! Okay, I will give this a full review, just not right now. I'm not even allowed to be on my computer right now. When I get back ...

Hello, my darling! Welcome to YWS! I, Loveless, will be reviewing your piece today. Well, let me get started! :pirate3: :pirate2: (For the longest time, I though that was a ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! :smt003 I, Loveless, take it upon myself to review your story to the best of my abilities! This I swear! Ah-hem. Well, here goes. The summer ...

Loveless here to say: Welcome to YWS! This poem was so cute in a really depressing way. The roses have wilted, they are no more. My feelings for you, have ...

Hello! First of all, welcome to YWS. I hope your stay is full of child-like wonder and amazement. :D Just to let you know, I will be putting indents and ...

Hi! It's nice to meet you! Now, I should get on to this review now. :pirate3: Dearest Haven, What more can I say to you, with this my dieing breath? ...

This was exquisite! Beautiful! Magnificent! The rhythm flowed so well, and this just took my breath away completely. Just a few, if any, mistakes and comments I have. ♥ You ...

*bows* Another work of your brillance, master! And, yeah, last time I checked, vampires didn't sparkle! Bram would be so fed up with Ms.Meyer! Dracula...sparkling((bleh)) Just the thought of it ...

Hahaha, dude, I loved this! It was pure genius! You've got mad skills man, my props go to you and only you! I loved the Jack Sparrow line, and the ...