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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: This is her life story

    This is her story, though not much has happened you can say. There wasn't much of a difference from day to day. Pretty much the same old story, she had ...

    Mar 10, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Eventually Falling

    I'm climbing the ladder, Finally reaching the top, I'm afraid to look down, So I can see who's watching. - "TO see who's watching?" The crowd cheers me on, They ...

    Mar 10, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: [deleted]

    I. Introducing Maria Dee They said that Maria Dee was one of those teachers who could walk into the room as if she'd been there all her life They say ...

    Mar 10, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Soul Factory

    Look at that factory: a sore upon the city-street; a boorish decoration that has sewn itself upon the sidewalk like a vile, self-sufficient plant. - use another metaphor here We ...

    Mar 10, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Give me that cigarette

    Give me that cigarette so that my lungs can turn as black as yours and I can have a reason to gasp. It's funny because when we first met, we ...

    Mar 10, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Southern Summer Soliloquy

    A Southern Summer Soliloquy I can’t change you when I can’t change me And I know you want me to ‘cause You spelled it out under the nightshade On sultry, ...

    Mar 10, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: I want him back

    Standing so tall A body my own - "of my own?" It seemed as if no one could phase me So I showed you my eyes The secrets held inside ...

    Mar 9, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Distant Memories

    He walks on the dusty sand Eyes darting beneath his night-vision glasses As a grimy boot steps softly into the doorway A child cries lying in the corner curled up ...

    Mar 9, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Deleted

    A mask of tissues. She hid behind her issues. Struggling to find reasons to cry. Struggling to find a reason to die. - Because of WHY she's crying? Her silver ...

    Mar 9, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Mother, I love you

    The faucets of this glass which always lie true are engraved with words - Mother, I love you. - Wow. That stanza flows perfectly. Your voice echoes long in this ...

    Mar 9, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Deleted

    The last time someone died. Everybody cried, then everyone lied. Lied to themselves of what really happened. The perfect one--The unexpected--The lonely one. What's done is done, the mother can't ...

    Mar 9, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: My Undying Search

    My love can be but a sand castle, A mighty fortress in appearance, But a decrepit heap of sand thrown about by the sea. That amour that once existed is ...

    Mar 7, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Tank Man/Sixteen

    The Tank Man As the tide of green tanks stared him down, he dared not submit to their unfaltering, untrue chorus of silence. No. Never. - Oooh. A simply dressed ...

    Mar 7, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: In A Lover's Eyes and a Lion's Den

    I was a waste, devoid of life But in your eyes, I was perfect The rift in my heart deepened Every time I looked into your eyes Why couldn't you ...

    Mar 7, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Sixteen

    I am still your little girl but i am growing older i am still your girl but i am growing older - Nice repetion. i know you don't want me ...

    Mar 7, 2008


Should we not walk? On our feet? The ones I now have again? I do like my feet. They are befittingly perambulatory.
— Pattern (Rhythm of War by Brandon Sanderson)